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Old 09-22-2005, 12:38 AM   #21
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Malreynolds, just curious, but have you ever had any of your work published?
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Old 09-22-2005, 12:48 AM   #22
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I've had a short play put into production, but that's about the end of it. I've never had a short story published.

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Old 09-22-2005, 01:44 AM   #23
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Haha, Varia is right. It's been panned throughout and I wrote it... Oh, two years ago. So, yeah. There's a good chance addendums will never get made.

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Old 09-23-2005, 07:02 PM   #24
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Coming from a guy who's easily entertained, that was fairly funny. The poodle and wrench jokes felt a little overused as many people have already pointed out but I would really like to see this finished. Excellent work.
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Old 09-23-2005, 10:19 PM   #25
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Old 09-23-2005, 10:26 PM   #26
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We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion. Truth is like a blanket that always leaves your feet cold. You push it, stretch it, it'll never be enough. Kick at it, beat it, it'll never cover any of us. From the moment we enter crying, to the moment we leave dying, it'll just cover your face as you wail and cry and scream.

Death and revenge shall be bitter among the grave.
The grave that marks the heart of the lost. Darkness falls upon thee as you kneel beneath the tree. The tree that you will always know, throughout the rain and snow. The blood does not wash the memory does not lie the swinging of the corps seams to cry. As u watch u do not move as if death has fallen upon thee too. Not a gun not but a rope as the victim seems to choke. Way up high u can not here that death and revenge is always here.
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Old 09-23-2005, 10:42 PM   #27
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My school is overrun with nerds... actually I am one.
But we're the cool people too.

Its like a 2 in 1 deal, cool people and nerds.
Someone remind me to tell you guys about the chess club at my school.
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Old 09-23-2005, 11:55 PM   #28
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. If you were born with the burden of a Y chromosome, you are born a girl, with a dress that makes your butt look fat and earrings that don't really go with the shoes BUT WHO THE HELL CARES ABOUT THE DAMN EARRINGS?
I really didn't think they had that kind of.. thing in my school.
But, sadly, as i walked to Spanish, this one freshman girl said to the other "I have been looking for 20 minutes for earings that match my shirt, ughh i am so mad, do you think this is cute?".

Alpine kids. URGGGGG. Go get yourself a high school. That town is friggen' rich!
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Old 09-24-2005, 12:07 AM   #29
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That was so hard to read it was absurd. Bad formatting and the grammar + spelling is atrocious.

The content itself wasn't bad; however, it was very, very cliche. You kept using the same jokes and all your allusions were to generally archetypal examples i.e. women griping is summed as "Does this make my butt look big." Use more original ideas.
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Old 09-25-2005, 06:19 AM   #30
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It was pretty interesting... but I think you could make the points and humor a bit more concise and to the point, it's pretty cluttered.

Make it nice and shiny, then it'll be an awesome read. Good job so far.



Funny how as I read it... I could see how this book could be written from a female perspective.
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