Old 07-14-2004, 05:08 AM   #1
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Old 07-14-2004, 09:34 AM   #2
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Once again, awesome job netsu! I can't wait 'til you get to the male characters! This is some great stuff!
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Old 07-14-2004, 11:18 AM   #3
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I know what that's supposed to be on her chest but it just looks like hair...

That aside, this one is excellent. The only problem I had with the other one was that the lips looked kinda funny. This one, though, looks perfect.

I just noticed a black spot next to her eye... what's with that?
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Old 07-14-2004, 02:05 PM   #4
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yea and there is another spot by her waist that looks like hair...where the pants make a shadow...good job though!
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Old 07-14-2004, 04:21 PM   #5
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my scanner picked up alot of pre shadowing in the drawing but i diidnt really see it as hair though. oh well i will watch out with the next one thanx for the input
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I know what that's supposed to be on her chest but it just looks like hair...

That aside, this one is excellent. The only problem I had with the other one was that the lips looked kinda funny. This one, though, looks perfect.

I just noticed a black spot next to her eye... what's with that?
The lips are not a mistake, some people like to draw their anime chicks with those lips for some reason. Style or something.
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Old 07-16-2004, 02:52 AM   #7
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Intense dude.
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Old 07-16-2004, 09:43 AM   #8
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Great pic! Very dynamic pose, lineart's good and so is the colouring and shading. However, I suggest working a bit on your anatomy; her right arm (the bent one) looks a bit out of proportion.

Hehe, good job though! I hate you for being able to draw hands so well.
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