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Meh, this is posted in chit chat under wickedawesomeful's thread, but I'd like a good critique for these.
What would you change or do differently. ![]() ![]() Also does anyone else delve into the world of 3d art? If so what program do you use and possibly show off some work x_0
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I don't like the robotic eye angle you went with, but you did pull it off as well as I would think the concept could be done.
The font used for track listing is a bit hard for me to read. The instances of "Retina" look fine though. ps I just realized... what's with the seam looking thing on the eye? They're in a different place on each image, but they're definitely present in both...
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It's actually a reflection of a distant wall I put up around the scene
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Wow. Very cool.
Now, I don't do any 3D art, but I'm interested in getting into it eventually. What program did you use? |
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Couldn't you have used a curved surface for that?
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I'm experimenting with using a spherical atmosphere right now, but it still needs to stand on a flat surface to get the shadow, So this could get interesting.
And Papp, I use 3ds max 7. ***edit Fixed the "seam" for the most part in this one. I'll render a large high quality one later, cause it takes like a half hour per frame to render. ![]()
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Ok. fix't
![]() ![]() Changed the font on the back cover cause you couldn't read it. Made the platform that it sits on alot smaller, no more (still a little) glare from it so it doesn't look like a seam. What do you think about this set?
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Good idea, and you pulled it off. Looks great!
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Couldn't you curve off the platform the eye is on? It's still leaving a strange effect in the eye. Something like this:
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I like the second one alot. Nice reflections btw, nice touch.
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That may have worked, but now I have the model fully rigged and am in the process of animating =)
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Also, be sure to spend 10,000 hours rendering it.
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