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Old 03-9-2020, 06:28 PM   #8
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Default Re: Nov/Dec 2019 Set 3

Sorry, haven't been able to get to notes on Light of Harmony because a lot has been happening in the past week or so for me. Working on the fixes for CQ tonight.

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Originally Posted by Gradiant
54.144: The (12)(34) starting here is alright because the 3 jumps starting on the blue match PR, but the very next set of (14)(23) doesn’t match the song doing an ascending line of notes. Something along lines of (12)(13)(23)(34)(24) or similar would be better suited.

-Changed to a [12][13][23][14][23] to match the PR a bit better, since the latter 3 jumps are more of a '343' melody than a '234' melody. Moved around singles going in and coming out of the pattern to flow better.

(**) Need a comb-through for consistency with the 16ths to hi-hat, have missing spots like 55.819, 82.628, 87.575, or ghosts like 56.139
117.015: As this is the climax of the song, all the 8th bass kicks here could use some oomph with jumps (minus the one at 118.451 because 32nds). Patterning could be kept pretty similar to still have that accented bass + synth with the (12) jumps

-There were quite a lot of 16ths to hi-hat, where most of the ones stepped were mostly accentuated ones via other instruments, but all of them should be now stepped.

118.212: Missing note

-fixed
Made some melody changes at the beginning too in regards to hi-hats as well, so should be a little bit more tasteful. stuff bolded in the quote are changes I've made. Sent in the fix.
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