[ositzxz369]

Originally Posted by psychoangel691

Judge: TC_Halogen

Back 2 Ze Core (ositzxz369) [8/10]
Artist: S.I.M. On Kor Funkle -- Perms: OK

- 12.957: glaring incorrect PR on this note (best on U)
- 26.152: technically this is a missing jump
- 40.012: moving this one note to R will make the pattern a bit easier since there’s not the strain of a 3-arrow jack on U
- on another note, those burst patterns are jarring being so mini-trill heavy; this isn’t to say they’re bad for playability, given that they’re mostly 3-note mini-trills
- 1:12.859: these are two different percussion samples, so a [UR] minijack isn’t quite accurate
- 1:16.736: technically there is a sound on the 32nd, but it’s so insignificant that keeping it in the same flow as the rest of the roll which follows the audible kicks is a little awkward; move it out of the way (a R will do fine)
- 1:24.268: technically these should be delayed a bit but it’s not a big deal since it’s still pretty apparent what’s being accented
- this song is one giant meme and I love it, aha
- chart’s pretty well polished overall - quite rudimentary and nothing stands out as amazing, but it’s effective and does the job.

@aj: Submitted 2nd draft now, though I have some questions

40.012 - Can you recheck (40.012-42.909) & (49.327-49.996) and see if minimizing the amount of trills improved the sections?
1:12.859 - Not sure what ur saying here. I'm guessing the issue is between the sound stepped as the [12][34] jumptrill of (1:12.146-1:12.591) and the sound stepped as the [34] mini-jumpjack of (1:12.859-1:12.948)? If this is the issue, would it be solved by changing the mini-jumpjack into something that isn't [34] (maybe by doing a [24] mini-jumpjack instead)?
1:16.736 - I moved the arrow into an R, but I shifted the roll pattern to avoid a framer issue. Recheck this to see if it matters.