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**ShastaTwist** · 09-8-2007, 03:00 PM

Make your lines shorter. What you're saying in two or three lines can easily be put into one stanza and it's easier to read.

09-8-2007, 03:00 PM	#24
ShastaTwist FFR Veteran Join Date: Sep 2004 Age: 33 Posts: 599	Re: ღ♥ღ♥my farewellღ♥ღ♥ Make your lines shorter. What you're saying in two or three lines can easily be put into one stanza and it's easier to read.