09-10-2023, 12:23 PM
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Venetian Snares stepper
  
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 483
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Re: Rex Leo Bellum Divinorus (A Fanfiction of 'The Lion King') Part 1
(1.) A few SPaG errors here with "giraffe" and "elephant" not being capitalized, and some of the dialogue tags being capitalized. (2.) Have you considered also posting this on Fanfiction.net, AO3, or any other fanfiction website?
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