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Originally Posted by JOTATELLO
The pack will be released after March 31 or after April 30? Lol
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edit: fixed! Also, I replaced one of my own files since I felt that it was better then what I had initially was going to put in there
Anyhow, notes!
Dracula (Storn) -
Accept with fixes
-offset should be 0.640
-holds in the intro felt too long for the warranted sounds. (up until 42.06)
-somehow snaps onsync at 1:00.032, I would check that out since adjusting the offset makes this part off
-would be nice for freezes to go with extending the guitar sounds like the ones in 1:31.157 to accentuate the riff.
-should be a jumptrill for the drum fills like in 1:32.375
-jumps should be applied to the 4ths like in 3:10.460
-jumps should be applied on the 16ths and 8th to be jumptrills on 3:11.304
-sync drifts from 3:37.428 to 3:48.280 where it snaps back on sync
-not a bad file, but should look through some of these instances. Definitely a good change of pace from the usual metal files that are on NBJS haha.
Cryonix (rparty & Bobby) -
Fixes needed
*Judging Beginner Chart only, I am not well-versed with index files so I do apologize for that.
-From 31.863 to 32.352, its best fitted as a jumptrill to accentuate the drum sounds.
-Man, I was hoping for a piano roll here (37.080)
-same thing here on 37.733, jump trill
-I think the section from 43.113 to 47.678 are actually 12th stream with the 16 drum fills between? need to double check but the layering (spare from the drum fills) felt way too much and the ghost notes, is it halloween?
-ghost notes on 1:03.086 & 1:03.167
-sync deviates by a 96th from 1:09.689 to 1:13.765
-This isn't a jumptrill on 1:14.254, it's actually a 48th mini split burst [12-43], which you can get away with that because chord cohesion
-1:19.472 is an unneeded quad tbh
-ghost notes from 1:19.716 to 1:20.287
-get rid of that mine on 1:50.946, this will ruin anyone's run if they want to AAA it lmao
-not a bad file, but lots of minor technical issues just ruins the flow tbh.
From the Depths of Time (CARMELLO) -
rejected
-sync is off by a 96th, plus the sync drifts
+13.502 made me laugh because it is fitting
-lots of missing layering opportunites for the drums throughout the song after 15.184
-the section from 24.784 to 33.334...wtf those anchors??? aaaaaaaaaaaa that needs lots of reworking the flow is broken here
+the slowdown is actually fitting considering the intensity of the song here.
-1:17.283 ...ygisdufsg
-1:20.433 you made it into a jump but the following notes are 64th mini-bursts? Consistency please.
-ghost notes, should be shifted up on 1:25.158 & 1:25.308
-1:31.983 ...yare yare daze....at least it wasn't as bad as the first anchored section but there was no flow to be felt there.
-I think you were a bit late on the burst on 1:41.583, that should be shifted up an entire 16th with the 4th being a jump
-the anchoring needs to go on 1:46.383
-This file needs major fixing. There's the fundamentals of basic stepping done on this file but this would need a major revamping before I can consider the file accepted.
Wumbology (Xelnya) -
I love you, but I hate you lmfao
...goddammit Xel, I love you but I hate you lmfao
-Although ya missed a mine on 27.590, shift it up from where the 8th jump is
-and check the hand usage in the latter half, the ones that used as an anchor for the "long" jacks, I don't think the sound is warranted there.
Hot Buttered (CARMELLO) -
rejected
-sync is a bit off so just adjust it a bit
-This is the better file of the two but there are major jump inconsistencies throughout the file. I would like that you take a look throughout the file to fix the jump placements. I would actually like to see this fixed up more than your other submission to be honest.