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Anticrombie0909 · 01-12-2004, 07:59 PM

I read the whole thing. Very good, really. The main character really had a lot of voice, you could really relate to his personality. While I do agree with Omeganitros that the ending was a bit cliche, you pulled it off very well. Keep writing, man.

01-12-2004, 07:59 PM	#8
Anticrombie0909 FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 4,683	I read the whole thing. Very good, really. The main character really had a lot of voice, you could really relate to his personality. While I do agree with Omeganitros that the ending was a bit cliche, you pulled it off very well. Keep writing, man.