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Old 06-8-2006, 01:03 PM   #15
flamingspinach
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Default Re: How To Get Accepted Into The FFR Community

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Originally Posted by alainbryden
umm...
One of the main reasons as to why this is ocurring...
...
occurring


...into easiler seperated ideas...
...
easily... seperated...


Always capitalize where necesarry, and use all periods, commas, and appostrophes.
...necessary ... apostrophes


...to understand using correct english
(Capitalize the 'E')


and explains in great detail. Which leads me to my next point.
(Not a sentance, which is not a noun)


Is a great example of an educated vocabulary.
(continuation of previous sentance, is should not be capitalized)


And I don't know how many times you forgot to but a space before opening a bracket.



...but I appreciate the effort. Really. I'm just trying to make a good thread more... credible.
sentence
separated

also, MrESqueek, while you're at it, could you edit in my corrected version of the example sentence too?
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