04-20-2006, 10:24 PM
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FFR Player
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Toronto
Posts: 291
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Re: How To Get Accepted Into The FFR Community
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Originally Posted by Tps222
"I played DDR SuperNOVA yesterday. I greatly enjoyed the diversity of the song selection, ranging from pop to IDM(jk). Although the newly-rendered graphics were not of my liking, as they distracted the senses away from the game, making it hard to focus".
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Although you do use a nice vocabulary in that sentence, the grammar of the last sentence is a bit off, which threatens the coherency of that post.
"I played DDR SuperNOVA yesterday. I greatly enjoyed the diversity of the song selection, ranging from pop to IDM(jk). The newly-rendered graphics were not of my liking, as they distracted the senses away from the game, and made it hard to focus".
Thanks,
NiK
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