04-13-2006, 05:51 PM
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FFR Player
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Alphabet City, Manhattan
Age: 35
Posts: 1,756
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Re: Optional, a play by Mal (PART 1)
I know that wasn't the conclusion to the whole story, but I was expecting the last line to be brilliant. Unfortunately, the pant joke wasn't really funny, and it felt like just another joke instead of a wrap-up line. I liked the dialog in Rehearsal better.
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