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MalReynolds · 01-23-2006, 02:59 PM

The thing about that though, FoJar, was that one person dying was the phenomenon. The aliens killed one person and made the rest live for some reason.

Pretty funny. It loses its flavor near the end, but the dialouge was snappy and humorous.

Something I've always found funny:

Whenever something screws up as monumentaly as say, leaving one guy left alive, it's always worth a laugh whenever the thing responsible for the screw up goes "Boy, is my face red."

Bigger the screw up, bigger the laugh.

Mal

PS: It was good.

01-23-2006, 02:59 PM	#3
MalReynolds CHOCK FULL O' NUTRIENTS Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: A Denny's Bathroom. Age: 36 Posts: 6,571	RE: Something I wrote in 5 minutes for class The thing about that though, FoJar, was that one person dying was the phenomenon. The aliens killed one person and made the rest live for some reason. Pretty funny. It loses its flavor near the end, but the dialouge was snappy and humorous. Something I've always found funny: Whenever something screws up as monumentaly as say, leaving one guy left alive, it's always worth a laugh whenever the thing responsible for the screw up goes "Boy, is my face red." Bigger the screw up, bigger the laugh. Mal PS: It was good. __________________ "A new take on the epic fantasy genre... Darkly comic, relatable characters... twisted storyline." "Readers who prefer tension and romance, Maledictions: The Offering, delivers... As serious YA fiction, I’ll give it five stars out of five. As a novel? Four and a half." - Liz Ellor My new novel: Maledictions: The Offering. Now in Paperback!