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Old 01-13-2006, 08:53 PM   #4
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Default Re: RE: The Official Rules Of Battle Writing

A few quick notes:
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Originally Posted by Lightknight924
Quit making fun of Sente3 for posting his story in Critical Thinking. I don't care how bad it seemed to you guys. At least he has more decency in literature than you. Plus it's Sauru, he's never seen Lord Of the Rings. Or so he claims.
"Saruman" or "Sauron." There is no "Sauru." Also, the wording of "seen" there is bad, since it's a book. You should have said "read or saw the movie of..."

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Originally Posted by Lightknight
"You know, not every idea has to be the perfect idea. Sente wrote his book through an idea that inspired him. Okay, story. Maybe with encouragement it would oif turned out alright.
I got little to say here. Basically, just that sente should have known that his story (not a book at all, and even if there were more chapters, it'd need at least 400 chapters to make a novel worthy of the title "book") was formulaic and that it would have been made fun of. He really should have seen that coming.

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Same goes for my idea. As well as TWG. When that started it wasn't a huge hit. A few people joined, now they don't stop. So everything needs a chance.
Actually, it was a pretty big hit at the beginning. And in fact, your other statement is wrong. "They don't stop"? We're on a hiatus right now.

Now that that's out of the way, I'll get to the real point at hand. This game idea would work better as a thread within the game forum, or as ONE thread within this Lit forum.

That's it, really. Good luck on this, I suppose.
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