01-12-2006, 03:51 PM
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CHOCK FULL O' NUTRIENTS
 
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RE: Soul Factory
I really, really enjoyed the concept and would like to see where it is going.
That's not to say that you should hurry up and rush the next section out. Outside of a few grammatical errors, it was a nice, easy read.
Mal
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