[FoJaR]

Originally Posted by Chromer

2. Fojar, are a literary scholar?

as far as you know.

Are you an English professor?

nope.

Are you even a high school English teacher?

LOL!

Then, who am I to take any of your highly unintelligent rantings to mind?

they werent rantings. they were cold calculated remarks about the substance of your writing.

God, if you were at least going to analyze something, at least type them in sentences with correct punctuation and grammar.

lol, i wasnt writing an essay about it. imagine everything i said written in red ink on top of a printed copy of your story. in that context, my grammar was perfect.

Besides, like I said before, until YOU actually write something, I could give a damn about what you say.

why is that? because to satisfy your ego you need to attack back?

listen man, you asked for specific problems with your writing and i gave them to you. now man up and stop acting like a little bitch.