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Triking · 01-11-2006, 10:44 PM

While this is not my first attempt at writing, this poem still is pretty awful. That's to be expected of someone who is just starting to learn how to write. Still, I liked this poem, and I think its the first I've ever written that didn't suck outright.

Untitled - (I haven't gotten around to it)

I pick up a book;
Timber in my hand.

The fire of my thought ignites,
consuming the wood to ash.

Man has a devouring fire,
the rainforest is no more.

All thinking is done,
All doors are wide open.

Progression forces us;
Man trapped jumps a cliff.

Black void there to greet him.

01-11-2006, 10:44 PM	#3
Triking FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 8	Something I wrote.. While this is not my first attempt at writing, this poem still is pretty awful. That's to be expected of someone who is just starting to learn how to write. Still, I liked this poem, and I think its the first I've ever written that didn't suck outright. Untitled - (I haven't gotten around to it) I pick up a book; Timber in my hand. The fire of my thought ignites, consuming the wood to ash. Man has a devouring fire, the rainforest is no more. All thinking is done, All doors are wide open. Progression forces us; Man trapped jumps a cliff. Black void there to greet him.