[dAnceguy117]

Originally Posted by ddrdanc3r55

I submitted a rough copy of a sim. It's my first and kind of crappy. Needs work.

First advice: making a simfile is not like writing an essay. You don't make drafts of it and have other people point out flaws in sentence structure.

You play it as you go along and fix anything you did wrong. If you can't do that, you shouldn't be making sims. After it's done, you can send it to friends and see if they think it's fun, or notice if you did anything wrong that you didn't catch. If it's done so poorly that you need someone to point out to you that you are stepping it wrong, then you shouldn't be submitting to this pack. That type of stuff isn't gonna fly, ya hurr.