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Originally Posted by MarioNintendo
Normal Battle v2 (Pixl):
* 0.68s For PR, should be "212" instead of "121". This happens more than once.
* 8.54s, 15.17s, ..: The PR for this arrow is wrong (considering arrow above)
* Measure 11: PR is wrong, should do something like "2 123" instead of having an 8th jack. Applies more than once.
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* 23.440s PR with arrow below
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this is flat out wrong the note you mentioned is clearly a lower pitch than the note before it
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* 25.30s There should not be a jump
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I think theres a very noticable volume increase on that note to warrant a jump ( for instance, the same 24th melody plays again half a measure later, its quiet a noticable difference imo)
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* 27.16s to 27.68s, there shouldn't be any jack here for PR. This mistake applies for similar bits every time in this section
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some of these should be jacks but I did miss part of the pr here, fixed.
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* 28.61s There should not be jumps here
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same case with significant boost in volume on these notes, I think its warranted
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* 31.01s Should be a down arrow for PR
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checked, this is not true, these notes have different pitches
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* 1m14.95s Note should be different than the one below
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pr here between the single note and the triplets is sacrificed in order to keep proper pr between the 2 sets of triplets, which are by far the more interesting part of the melody. an 8th jack at this speed is not significant enough for this to cause issue. I would have to sacrifice pr in some way or another here regardless.
HOWEVER
after reading your next correction and making fixes based on it I can actually keep pr right for both so thats nice. fixed (I do have to break pr later in the due to this change but its very minor)
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* 1m15.16s This should be "434" instead of "432"
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fixed
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* 1m18.26s to 1m21.57s This section is copy pasted from the one above, yet the notes are different. This should be reflected in PR.
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fixed
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* 1m23.75s Starting here, there should not be jacks anymore
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semi fixed, theres still 1 minijack but the rest is fixed
also changed up heavy a bit, it breaks away from pr in a few places and has no 16th jacks, with fairly lenient patterns. it is still the same on a lot of levels but I think its distinctly different now.
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