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Old 03-23-2017, 02:08 PM   #117
swiftwinter
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Default Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH

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Originally Posted by MinaciousGrace View Post
Migrant at Daybreak (swiftwinter) - The quick swap from left hand to right hand trill here is kind of awkward and doesn't really flow to the music.
did you mean to mention a specific instance for this?

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84.370-end you have jumps on the prominent sounds and it feels a little lackluster. I'd like to see the more prominent sounds represented more intensely (triplets were suggested by lofty) or some of the unstepped background sounds to be brought forward. Currently the ending feels less like an ending/outro and more like an afterthought.
I agree I didn't really know what I wanted to do with the ending and I didn't want to cut it because it sounds cool so I will attempt to make it more unique following this advice. i'll send a fix in a day or two.
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