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Old 11-13-2016, 02:33 PM   #63
MinaciousGrace
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Default Re: Lofty Megapack 6 - The Invocation Pentafiles

Addiction 451 (broomtheatre) - That intro oh my god dme flashbacks. I have no idea what's going on with the file or song but I'm fairly certain I found it fun.
accepted by decree of lord loftysaurus due to my confused ambivalence

Do You Freeze it? (hamsterdam) - Freezestream:


From what I understand lofty is working with you on revising this and it's accepted pending said revisions. I mostly don't mind the file as-is personally however I really think you failed to capture the vocal intensity and pitch dynamic at 104.1s, other than that there's some rough stuff but nothing else that I strongly feel needs to be addressed.
chill leisure dump for the less skilled

Old Yeller (laffytaffy) - I'm not a huge fan of how abruptly the intro 32nds fall away into 16ths. I understand why you did it but I'd prefer to see 32nds interspersed throughout the intro. Once again great non-conventional pattern use rooted in strong technical fundamentals. Good job.
lofty thinks the song is meh but hes dumb

Pun-ishment (quim) - Wow you took this song in a completely different direction than I would have. There are some super nitpicky details that I want to fix (like an 8th anchor starting a note late halfway through the file). I also find myself wondering why you chose not to place a jumptrill starting at 93.2s when you had done so to the same sound everywhere else. There are some really cool things going on in the instrumentals that I think you captured well, however I also think the file would be greatly served by using 16th minitrill patterns in the section rather than minirolls.
vocals in the song are kinda meh imo i could be dum tho

purediarrhea (deluge) - Some of the patterning in this is excellent, but unfortunately this suffers from the same systemic issue shared by most of the other rejected files. About half the file is 5 nps and the other half is 30; the ending spikes to over 40 with mash inducing patterns reminiscent of spica. The result is an uneven play experience that almost inevitably results in frustration and a lack of satisfaction. Not what the pack is looking for.
file isn't that bad tbh but i couldn't pass up the wordplay

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