[Charu]

I did it, yaaaaaaay!

Alright, Ant IDM is a nice streamy, flowy file during the first half.

However, when the file introduces jump stream around... here

...I feel your roll-type patterns start to muddy up and you instead have all these one handed trills in this section which leads to a lot of awkward transitions. I'm not really a big fan of the sudden jump in difficulty either, but I suppose it's not the worst thing in the world.

Really, all I would have to suggest for something like this is probably redo that JS section so you can incorporate more roll patterns instead of the one handed trills. Everything else about this file is pretty fun!

Got some animes going on in this bitch!!!!

It's one of those "Easy at first but then throws hard shit at the end" files. A tamer Pandora, if you will.

First of all...

This part I think should've just been either those [1][4] jumps or [2][3] jumps all the way through and not change.

Speaking of it being one of those spikey files. I feel the types of patterns used for the bursts are very... erm... unforgiving given the overall difficulty of the chart. I heavily suggest to maybe make those bursts patterns jump-trillable and have the illusion of it being a scary pandora-like file! I think it would make people think more fondly of it than be one of those files where people go

"Wow, what an asshole file this is. Fuck this file, bro."

Is it the vocal one...?

IT IS, YEEEEESSS!!!

Sadly...

I don't think this file is up to snuff, unfortunately. It's an easier version of Slashmaid on FFR, but that's not why it's not up to snuff.

Ya see, the stepper in question...

...Has these lone 16ths in between some of the segments. Now I can't cry foul about it not following the song, but my goodness do these 16ths feel out of place! I suggest to take these out.

Now this here is what I call simplifying a bit too much. Those 12ths don't exist, and I know what you were going for too. It's not gonna be easy, but I suggest first fully stepping that roll-y drum sound at that spot, and then simplify that!

This section with guitar rifts and rafts like going crazy... I hope you know that these are not 12ths either, right? Those are all 16ths! Isolating at 1000 notes at .4 rate makes me sure this is the case (and because Dossar's version already on FFR, heheh)

Be may it not sync right here. It's surprisingly flowy, which is nice. I think you should redo this section with 16ths though! SORRY!

Eeeeee, I don't hear those 32nds!

Also... this an asshole way of ending the file, dohoho. I suggest changing that 32nd jump!

Overall, I can dig this soley because it's Slashmaid. But it's got some work to iron out, especially that 12th section!

Oooo baby some break beats!

There are MANY...

...And I do mean many...

...instances in the file where I see you stepped the 32nd drums, but then ignored it like a measure afterwards. I think for something like this, you'll need to step all those drums, no matter what! I think it would make a nice, bursty file if you stepped all the instances of those 32nd drums.

Oh! One more thing...

PLEASE GET RID OF THOSE CAMEL JACKS!!! And this is not the only instance of them either... thank you

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And maybe one more thing actually.

So I'm not gonna gif it because it's at least 20 seconds long. At the end of the file, you have a lot of notes going to [3] and I think you could've added variety right here. I think you should make those long jacks different arrows for every measure I think.

If you don't want that, I'd suggest fading the song right there then, dohoho.

I think you got something here to be honest. You just need to fill in all the instances of those 32nds I think (and get rid of those nasty camel jacks)

Hey kid, want some dildos?

...Surprisingly flowy, despite it looking like it would play awful, hahaha.

However... if I may be picky-wicky

Many of these trilly patterns you got going on have [12] and [34] jumps with those fast gluts. I'm a firm believer that those are usually, 100%, ALWAYS awkward to hit no matter how you pattern the gluts. If they were going slower, I'd be cool, but eeeeeeh, not when it's this fast.

This happens a lot in the file too.

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE, EEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWW...

Change this place, I beg of you!