Checked out one of the four that Middie didn't get to.
I"ll try to provide a little bit more... constructive review, especially with regards to how to sync better.
Mechanize-
Offsync. The correct gap is 5.423. The correct BPM is 192.
As Middie said, your gap will basically never be 0.000 so you need to do a little work to get it synced correctly.
Take a look at your song in a program that allows you to view the waveform, such as Audacity (which is free, and is also really useful for cutting songs). This lets you get the exact gap. For BPM, use an online BPM timer that lets you tap a key for a period of time and then gives you a resulting speed. Often times you will get something like 192.329 BPM and for a studio-mastered song such as this one, you can guess that they chose the nearest whole number as the BPM.
Alternatively,
use DDReam to step, as it includes both of these functions and more as part of the program (you knew I was going to say this :P)
The song is actually very high in potential for being a good file. Static BPM, decent rhythmic variety, lots of layers of sound to work with. Good choice.
Your stream patterns tend to have hidden runningmen in them. This leads them to be much more difficult than they look.
Hold notes seem a little inconsistent in their usage. Try to pick a specific sound or sounds you use them for, and remain consistent with it throughout the song. For example, something like guitar bends are great for holds, but make sure to use a hold on each one.
In your 16th note bursts around 140 seconds into the song, you have minijacks. They make this section significantly more difficult than the rest of the chart. This would be fine (in fact, minijacks can be quite fun) except that the sound being stepped here appears elsewhere in the song and you used much easier patterns there. This lack of consistency makes the minijacks and their associated difficulty spike stand out like a sore thumb.
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Originally Posted by XelNya
Again sorry if this is too blunt, or even rude. I'm quite horrible at this.
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Saying "sorry for being rude" is not an invitation to go and be rude anyway.
Try
not being a dick when you review something, for starters.
Once you get that down, I heard people really like
constructive criticism more than just being told their stuff is crap.
Don't just shoot something down, give potential solutions too.