07-18-2005, 05:17 AM
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NO DOUBT GET LOUD
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: California
Age: 35
Posts: 5,650
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What grade are you in? Because at higher grades they tell you how to use better wording, sentence structure, and other little things that would be amazing for a story if a person wrote it.
If you say your grade, I can think back at what they taught me then and tell you what you are missing.
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