04-21-2014, 01:22 AM
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FFR Player
Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: Mexico
Age: 32
Posts: 20
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Re: Yolomania Vol. 3 Submissions Open!
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Originally Posted by Wafles
(SonicX) Entrance - Accepted
One of my favorite songs from Cytus. Chart is pretty straight forward 12th note runs/jacks, nothing to complain about, it fits the song and it works. Fun little file.
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Yay, at least one song is accepted  .
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Originally Posted by Wafles
(SonicX) croiX - Conditional
Shows some promise but technical errors and generally strange layering decisions make this a conditional for me. Could definitely be cleaned up to be acceptable. Some 32nd patterns are really sketchy as well, given the fact that its 195 bpm you have to be a bit careful there.
Detailed notes:
Beginning Piano Section - Whats going on with the jumps here? Missing arrows in a couple spots as well. The jumps right at the end make sense but the rest don't.
26.448 - 32nd patterns not really cool given the speed
28.063 - missing note on the 16th
30.833 - same
40.679 - same
40.833 - 16th shouldn't be here
41.833 - 32nd patterns need to be revised
56.986 - missing note on the 16th
63.174 - 32nd patterns again
70.695 - can't tell why you left some 16ths out starting here. the ones you left in don't really make sense.
79.541 - 32nd patterns starting here and the next two groups all need to be revised
84.233 - 24ths? both this and the next occurance feel wrong to me.
87.002 - starting here this whole section is underlayered compared to the rest of the file for no apparent reason. missing too many 16ths to name.
95.772 - 32nd patterns again
102.695 - huge difficulty spike in this section. 32nd patterns are crazy. 24th note run doesn't really make sense. consider revision.
We could possibly accept a cleaned up version of this song since it is quite cool but the chart just has too many issues at the moment.
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Sorry for the jumps at the beginning, I thought removed them. I need check this song again and after fix this issues, I'll re-send the song.
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Originally Posted by Wafles
(SonicX) Dance - Conditional
Underlayered generally and kind of boring as is. I could see a revision of this possibly being acceptable but it needs quite a bit of work. Some parts were just a bit too boring to really make the file replayable. See what you can do with this and resubmit and we'll take a detailed look but as is its pretty far off, so much so that I'm not going to name every instance in question. In general: just see what you can do to make it more interesting.
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Yeah, I think the same as you after sent this song... well, maybe I can do something with this song.
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