[James May]

Originally Posted by moches

i like the ellipses... what's the effect you're going for with those? something a little contemplative? a little measured?

on one note, i think it helps a lot to read out your poetry. it helps you figure out which words will fit better. some people have an ear for it (i'm not so lucky), but even then it can really make your poetry feel the way you want it to!

Its something contemplative. Its actually relative to a story that I am writing right now that relates to a darker theme. As a relation to a darker moment that I had gone through years ago.