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Old 01-24-2012, 08:17 PM   #29
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Default Re: File review's

Kory seems to be under the impression that I'm a furry.


Destination of the Heart:

- nice job PRing the intro - this or 1343 works to capture the C/G/C (+1)/G/C pitches of the melody (also, this note right here is proof that PR is subjective/relative - Kory says that it sticks out, but I say it's correct; he'd probably say something like 1232 or 2343, which also works because it still captures the interval properly)
- 29.615 to 31.165: The strings here are fairly gentle and quiet, so the jumps/triples here stick out quite a bit. The quad is fine, though.
- 33.815 to 60.065: To give this section a bit more of a punch, you could add triples to cymbal crashes. Not required by any means, but it can help seperate the crashes from the rest of the song because of layering.
- 35.915: nice intentional ommision of layering to account for the 16ths, it plays out smoothly this way
- 43.415 to 47.015: your layering for this section disappears - any reason why? Being that you only omit jumps when the melody is playing 16th notes, there's not too much of a reason to omit them here too. Take into account that the difficulty suddenly drops for a bit because of this, when it doesn't really need to be.
- 53.015 to 57.515: ^, although not quite as big of a deal because 16ths start appearing again
- 71.540: since the jumps are following strings, this jump and the one at 71.990 are incorrectly placed - they land on 4ths here, too.

This file isn't bad by any means - in fact, it was surprising to see someone claiming to be a new stepartist and seeing some halfway decent pitch relevancy. It flows relatively well too.
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