12-14-2011, 10:14 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 7,327
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Re: FFR Community Pack Winter 2011 (Submissions Open)
Tera gets sand in his monitor (ghost-)
Oni
There are a lot of layering problems and inconsistencies with this. Not bad for decent scoring factor though, so I might save this for MAD Pack 3 whenever I do that. Not really suitable for this pack the way it is now though.
No
Far East Fantasy Flowering Game Night (Condoct)
Standard
Acceptable.
Yes
Heavy
Acceptable.
Yes
Oni
Hard pain trills. Pretty fun overall though. Layering is fine and patterns aren't all that difficult aside from that one 32nd one handed trill on [1][2]. Picked up on a few places where you could've layered in some more jump placements but they aren't all that needed.
Yes
Ultrasounds! (Rin-Dude)
Heavy
Acceptable though it isn't all that simplified.
Yes
Oni
Hard pain 24th streamz. Fun.
Yes
Result (S Rank) (Midigami)
Beginner
This would be better off as the Heavy chart and then bumping your current one down to Standard. A lot of missing percussive jumps. Even if you intentionally left them out I feel that the file is very awkward to follow as a result. Again, a lot of those empty gaps could layer other stuff in the song and would make the file flow more fluidly. Holds could be trimmed shorter in length to reduce visual density. Overall, not bad at all but could use a more thorough layering job especially for a song as short as this.
Maybe
Heavy
Not bad as a chart for beginners but severely underlayered and boring as a result. Tons of empty gaps that note placements could fill up which would also in turn make the file flow more fluidly. If you're gonna step a song as short as this, make it interesting by layering more thoroughly to say the least.
Maybe
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