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Old 11-1-2011, 12:23 AM   #2
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Default Re: FFRPartyy Pack Vol. 1 (Submissions OPEN!)

Reviews:

(Torrent) Chocobreaks: [Accepted.]
PENIS SHAPED MINEFIELD NEXT TIME plz

(Midi vs. Nai) Traverse Town [Piano Version]: [Needs work before accepted.]
There are a couple of misrhythms that I noticed upon viewing it in DDream. A good tip for this is to slow down the playback of the music
to anywhere between 0.3x to 0.6-7x and listen closely to better place the notes with the melody. Other than this, it's a nice and simple easy file that needs a complete revamp in most if not all areas.

(Midigami) PORT 1: [Needs work before accepted.]
Classic VGM file. However, a few things. A bit of the layering in the second half is incosistent. You have some notes accented with hands whereas in said half, you do not. Remember to keep things consistent and not go in and out of certain techniques with your note placement.

(Nai) Jason Vorhees Infomercial: [Accepted.]
Lmfaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

[Re-submission] (ScarletSky) Baroquen Music Box Re-Inventio: [Accepted.]
Your re-submission was definitely 100x more enjoyable and fun to play through.
Great job on the layering, file's a bit tricky but nonetheless, very challenging and fun.

[Re-submission] (ScarletSky) Military Stormstep: [Accepted with improvements.]
After 3 resends, I doubt you can layer this anymore. Honestly, I'd just send something else.

(00Razor00) F: [Accepted.]
MORE AMURO plz.

(Torrent) AndTheKillerWoreDenim: [Accepted.]
Realllly fun, challenging as ****, repetitive at some points but still overall something to contend with.

(Kommisar) Battle Against a Dangerous Bloomers: [Accepted.]
Kommi bringing the Japan to this pack. 'Twas a neat, clean, fun file. Also known as Gundam-Dude's OP once it's out.

(wc) Believe In Yourself: [Accepted.]
I couldn't help but to think of Arthur when I played this, lol.

(wc) Cinema: [Accepted.]
Those 32nds really made the file interesting and challenging. This version definitely sounds better than the original remix. +1.

(wc) Feel Anymore: [Accepted.]
Very fun. Beginning jumpstream (handstream?) was a bit brutal, to me. Otherwise, cool song. Really enjoyable.

(wc) Hatsune Miku no Bousou -OVERDRIVE- : [Accepted.]
More like Hatsu MINEFIELD. Overall, it's a really fun and short Vocaloid song. Holds much replay value.

(wc) Let Me Go: [Rejected.]
To me, this felt a bit repetitive. Nothing really wrong with the chart, but it's more of a song issue, as explained to ya before.

(wc) Mario Theme: [Accepted.]
nananana, dodo do do do, dododododo. pew pew

(wc) Passage D: [Accepted.]
This has to be one of the most enjoyable Passage D files I've played anywhere.
Little to no awkward patterns, flows well, but, it could've used more mine action.

(wc) The Final Episode: [Accepted with improvements.]
I understand the upon reaching the second half is where the song climaxes, but throughout most of it, some of the trill-bass like areas were awkwardly stepped to me, and it felt rough playing through them. The beginning could definitely use some more notes/holds as it felt a bit empty. Nonetheless, great song, but it needs a little more fine tuning.

(wc) The Next Episode: [Accepted.]
The next episode to the final episode. Somewhat of a fun dump.

(wc) Revelations: [Accepted.]
This'll be crazy hard for those who have not played the Dragons' Fury edit, nonetheless, personal bias for The Crimson Armada. <333333

(wc) Sleepyhead: [Accepted.]
Second favourite out of your entire submissions. I'll definitely be playing this one again.

(bob bob) DJ Battle (Jodler Mix): [Accepted.]
Pretty fun. File could've used a bit more layering and some mine action.
Loved the bpm changes, IIDX awesomeness afteralll; it's decent.

(TC_Halogen) -Act V- Battle at Mammoth Mountain: [Accepted.]
The first 40 seconds are hard as ****, nonetheless, skgjdgjdghsjk... loved it.

(SKG_Scintill) Aerophobia: [Accepted.]
MINEFIELD in the beginning, otherwise, very fun. No complaints. Great song choice!

(Prof Raine) Almace: [Accepted.]
Nice GFX. Pretty decent file. Nothing out of the ordinary although it felt a bit boring in some areas.

(SKG_Scintill) Elektroschokk: [Accepted.]
Short and straightfoward. No issues.

(SKG_Scintill) Gonna Hit the Bass: [Accepted.]
Very tricky file. 32nd mini trills here and there but very comfortable to hit. Overall, enjoyable and fun to play.

(Prof Raine) Just a Little Smile: [Accepted with improvements.]
The file was a bit lacklustre. Although pretty simple, it need a little bit more to keep me interested in it.

[Re-submission] (Xx{Midnight}xx) My ****in' Desire For You: [Accepted.]
The easier charts are great. Glad you appealed to the less pro players. I didn't really care too much for the Edit chart and judged it based on the Challenge. Glad you toned down those parts, which made it more enjoyable to play. Still kept the difficulty spikes as usual, but great job this time around.

(XxMidigamixX) Nicholas Cage is ANGRY: [Rejected.]
Mis ryhthms in certain spots. Patterns are questionable, e.g., 32nd minijacks, unecessary quads, etc.
File's all over the place and needs to be re-structured.

(SKG_Scintill) Struct: [Accepted.]
Much laid back from your other submissions. Cool song choice, chart was fairly decent. No complaints here.

(Housekeeper) Bearstream: [Rejected.]
Absolutely not. Wasn't much fun to play especially at that BPM.

(Prof Raine) White Acropolis: [Accepted.]
My favorite out of your submissions. Song choice was great, chart was definitely fine for the most part. Well done.

(Kommisar) Final Audition Episode 2-1: [Accepted.]
Episode 2-2 and 2-X will be joining you, my friend.

(Housekeeper) Booty, ass, ass, clapping, booty shakin, ass poppin, cartoon (V2): [Accepted.]
As I said before, the hand usage is overdone, but it's fine for a Challenge chart. Overall, file seems ok, no mishaps anywhere. Nicely done.

(Gammablaster) Banned Forever: [Accepted.]
Decent chart. Nothing too out of the ordinary. Although, it is a bit difficult.

(Gammablaster) Crab Nicholson Extreme Sleepover: [Accepted.]
Neat little 48th swing. Decent layering and enough to keep me interested in it. Cool little tricks at the end, haha.

(ZX18) Chipscape: [Accepted.]
Crazy chart for the most part. Some fast 16th jumpstream here and there, but nothing that should be a pain to hit. Neatly done.

(Prof Raine) Memento Mori [Accepted.]
Dug the X-mods throughout the file, wasn't to keen on pattern choices, but it's decent enough to make its way in.

(Prof Raine) Almace: [Accepted with improvements.]
Layering seemed inconsistent throughout the file, imo, neat little bpm trick you had throughout the file, but it needs a bit of a revamp before being accepted. Try beefing up the file just a little bit more.

(eastsideman09) Lines in Wax: [Accepted.]
MINEFIELD. Although, there are a couple of misrhythms with note placement on the vocals in the beginning, the rest sure made up for it.
Not shabby. Definitely enjoyed it.
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