[Gundam-Dude]

Mannequin Religion V2 (condoct)
Good to go.
Yes


xfer (Yesssss)
Automodellista **** yes
Standard
Good as an easier chart.
Yes
Heavy
Good as an easier chart.
Yes
Oni
- Handjacks in the later half are tough but add a really nice climax to the file.
- No real commentary. I loved the jacks in this.
Yes


It Gets Better (xVaLoRx)
Easier charts
- It shows up as a bunch of edit charts for me for whatever reason but the charts are there. More or less good to go though the layering is kind of all over the place.
Oni/Edit
- Thought a little more of the bass could've used layering with jumps but personal preference really.
- Very pad/index influenced patterns give a nice old school feel.
- Try to fix the whole edit chart mess and sending me an updated sm. If I do it myself, I'll probably end up mixing up charts and/or deleting one by accident.
Pending


Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (Yume)
Standard
- Good as an easier chart.
Yes
Heavy
- Holds are a bit overboard but it's pretty much part of your style anyways, lol.
- Loved the trill patterns. Mine usages were simplistic but readable.
- Good climax as well.
- Not real commentary. Loved the chart.
Yes


NEW ANACHRONISM -Mou Syujinkou ni Narenai- (Real Side) (Yume)
Heavy
- This chart flows better than the Oni chart, rofl.
Oni
- Very danger mines.
- That column 1 bass part is BRUTAL. Same goes for the hand trill stuff in the later half.
- Very tough file but overall really repetitive.
- I'm going to have to think about this one. It could make it into the pack as the hard boss file, but this will depend on submission flow and available spots.
Maybe


B & T (Darkcalibur)
Beginner
- Could be way, way more thoroughly layered if this is meant to be a difficult and layered version of Heavy.
- Definitely could use a much more thorough layering job with jump and hand placements.
Maybe
Heavy
- M65-73 I still don't think the patterns are all that relevant to this section but whatever.
- A lot of the staircase patterns in general I don't really feel relevant to the ascending/descending scales throughout the song as well.
- Minimalistic in layering but it fits the whole solo feel of the song.
- Fun overall and patterns flowed well.

Tweak up Heavy chart only if you want to. I could help you with it since I'm pretty sure you have no idea how to layer those parts I have a problem with. Beginner chart definitely needs to be layered more. Until then, Maybe


Mousou Shoujo A (Darkcalibur)
Standard
- Could be simplified even further. There's really not much of a difference between this and Heavy.
- Get your heavy chart sorted out.
No
Heavy
- I'm not feeling the emphasis of the hand usages. The handclaps are very quiet and not prominent enough to call of hand usage.
- M30+ avoid coloured minijacks. They're tough to read. Also the patterns could be a lot more spread out to capture the feel of chaotic vocals. Right now they're way too focused towards [2] and [3].
- M60+ minijacks and 32nds are pushing it for pattern awkwardness despite adding climax.
- Layering is passable. Above notes are keeping me from accepting this, especially when you sent in so many files and I have to be stricter as a result.
No


One Reason (Darkcalibur)
Standard
- Could be simplified even further. There's really not much of a difference between this and Heavy. But whatever, I can let this slide since the chart's cool.
Yes
Heavy
- One handed 32nd trills are a little much but at this speed it's not a problem.
- Jacks made this much more interesting and enjoyable to playthrough.
- Layering is good although I'd prefer more guitar/percussive layering over vocals.
Yes


SeevisionS (Darkcalibur)
STOP IT WITH THE BEGINNER HARD CHARTS AND MAKE EASIER CHARTS ASDKJAHDKJ
Beginner
- YEAH EVEN DENSER LAYERING TO WHAT I CAN'T EVEN TELL WHAT THE HELL IT GOES TO
No
Heavy
- Beginning 16ths need to start on an 8th note, not a 16th.
- With all honesty though, the 16ths you're layering are barely audible and I can't even make out what most of the 16ths even go to when I'm playing this. 16ths aren't really needed to begin with.
- Same goes with the 32nds. I can barely hear what they even go to even when I turn my volume all the way up and tap quieter.
- Because I can't even hear almost all the stuff you're trying to layer, just following this file is a complete mess to me and would probably confuse the hell out of everyone else, rofl.
- Overall, your weakest submission. Sorry brah :'(
No


Temptation (Darkcalibur)
Standard
- Could be simplified even further.
- Get your Heavy chart sorted out.
Maybe
Heavy
- M27+ minijacks leading into quads are pushing it. Quads are okay usage wise since you have enough 3-note hands to counterbalance but the minijacks leading into them are tough for less skilled players.
- M50, 336BPM 32nd roll, absolutely ****ing no. Simplify it to 8ths.
- Hands with mini-holds are going overboard and add a lot of unnecessary hold usage. Try to cut back I suppose.
- Simplify the quads into 3-note hands to avoid the whole minijack deal I mentioned first.
- You absolutely MUST fix that 336BPM roll. It's impossible to combo.
- Layering is good and file's enjoyable. Fix the above notes and this'll be good.
Maybe


God Only Knows (Darkcalibur)
STOP IT WITH THE BEGINNER HARD CHARTS AND MAKE EASIER CHARTS ASDKJAHDKJ
Beginner
- My piano chord hold pet peeve kicks in, but it's nice to see the piano being emphasized in this that the Heavy chart lacks. I would still rather prefer jump or grace note placements over holds though.
- M43+ you're missing some 12ths/24ths to keep your gallop layering consistent and flowing.
- Now this is good as a beginner chart. 32nds and minijacks are passable for this. Get your Heavy chart sorted out.
Maybe
Heavy
- M7+ minijacks leading out of hands are pushing it.
- 32nds in general aren't all that prominent and don't really need to be layered. Since you threw in so many one handed oriented 32nds, it really detracts from the file's flow.
- Piano is completely ignored as well which I feel is prominent enough to emphasize and layer.
- M43+ you're missing some 12ths/24ths to keep your gallop layering consistent and flowing.
- Layering's good for the most part. Remove 32nds and minijacks and try to layer in the piano. This way you can still keep the file a little hard for scoring without throwing too much awkward patterns into the mix.
Maybe


Shining Days (Darkcalibur)
Standard
- Could be simplified even further but I guess this is passable since the Heavy chart is good.
Yes
Heavy
- Holds in the beginning are lacking pitch relevancy to the guitar rifts which is funky.
- Mini-holds are also a bit lacking in pitch relevancy but I guess it's passable.
- Your most solid submission. I have no real commentary for this. File's enjoyable and well layered.
Yes


Pink Lady (megamon88)
Standard
- Good as an easier chart.
Yes
Heavy
- Mines were a nice touch.
- Rainbow wubwub trills are tough to MA.
- Layerings great. No real commentary.
Yes


Overture | Kana (xVaLoRx)
Easier charts
- It shows up as a bunch of edit charts for me for whatever reason but the charts are there. More or less good to go though the layering is kind of all over the place.
Oni/Edit
- Beat 34+ you should've just kept layering the main synth rather than swap layering. The sudden layering transition is awkward.
- Same deal as above at M36+
- Layering's good for the most part. Very pad/index influenced patterns give an old school feel.
- Try to fix the whole edit chart mess and sending me an updated sm. If I do it myself, I'll probably end up mixing up charts and/or deleting one by accident.
Pending


M-A (IcyWorld)
Heavy
- Good as an underlayered jumpstream chart. Still fairly tough for scoring.
Yes
Oni
- Repetitive but good for scoring.
- Boss file of the pack pretty much.
Yes


CaptivAte2 ~kakusei~ (Rebound)
- Jumps were iffy to follow at first once the stream came in.
- Could use the bass/percussive jump placements to keep layering easier to follow as opposed to the sparse piano chord jumps.
- Layering's good. File's good as an introduction to jumpstream files for less skilled players.
- Get easier charts finished.
Pending


Piano Concerto No. 666 ~ Jealousy Fire (Gpop)
- Easier charts are all good. File's good to go.
Yes


Posts updated. File queue sits at 27 files. 40 files will most likely be the bare minimum for release, but maximum I'll probably take in is 50 in total.