02-16-2011, 10:14 PM
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FFR Player
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Suwannee, GA
Age: 31
Posts: 49
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Re: Poem: In the sky
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Originally Posted by Tokzic
Repetition for no reason is generally a terrible idea. "Beaten down, with heads held high" is thick with expression and sounds meaningless.
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What repetition are you talking about? and the line is definitely not meaningless
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