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Old 02-16-2011, 10:14 PM   #12
Midnighter
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Default Re: Poem: In the sky

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Originally Posted by Tokzic View Post
Repetition for no reason is generally a terrible idea. "Beaten down, with heads held high" is thick with expression and sounds meaningless.
What repetition are you talking about? and the line is definitely not meaningless
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