05-15-2009, 11:12 PM
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No Love Lost
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Toronto, Canada
Age: 34
Posts: 154
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Re: "Angel" My first love poem
I think poems are generally pieced together to leak feelings that are unexplainable.
Everything you described was explainable and very simple. Your spotlight was your "Angel" and you used uncreative metaphors to spice up your simple minded thoughts.
Also, you might be implying your girl has bony shoulders thus wings could pop out at any moment. That's one less blow job mister.
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