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Old 05-14-2009, 07:27 PM   #15
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Default Re: "Angel" My first love poem

I thought it was a good peice
So calmly written to.
I've read a lot of poems
But I've only liked a few.
You seem to be getting good at it.
So, I'll leave you with only this.
Keep on writing neat like this
And people wont think you're...

Yeah, I think you've got it.

BTW: Why'd you edit that post, mead?
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