[moches]

Originally Posted by omgitznpv

4. Romancecar - moches

2/5 *REJECTED*

Boring, repetitive, etc. You could layer better; some of the jumps were when the song was really light, for example. Some freezes were unnecessary, and you could probably change some of them to be something more effective. The 24ths are also questionable to me; you could try something else for that. Lastly, you probably don't need two charts for this, as the edit itself suffices. The mines don't change much and they're fine in the edit chart.

So basically...

-light parts call for lighter layering
-some 24ths feel off
-just vary it up a little

And before I fix it, if the file was as good as it could get based on the merits of the song, would it be accepted? I don't want to spend an hour fixing a file that isn't good enough to get in no matter what.

EDIT: The letter organization was sort of obnoxious for me, but it might be useful for beginners who don't want to sort through all those files to find something they can play. Also don't leave me out I was part of the FFRCP1 team rite? T.T