[TheRapingDragon]

Originally Posted by Adamaja456

i would of like to see maybe another paragraph or two similar to your last one where you address that actual question. you dont have to answer it, but maybe just talk about it more to give the paper more of a balance. besides that, i liked reading it.

I'd agree with this. I didn't spend long writing it so I know that I could have some more paragraphs in there. I definitely need a better transition from "what is I" to "what am I" rather than "getting back to the question".