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Default Re: Batch Review Thread

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12/01/08

The Queue
After Altair - Silvuh - seems fine
Bloodmeat - dore - approving, but want to see the 2 weird hand sections changed to match opening/closing
bmv.578 - dag12 - approving on condition of jx/blu tweaks
Card House Dreamer - Silvuh
Dead and Direct - Patashu
Einstein Rosen Bridge - dore - accepting under condition of fixes
Etude in E Major - Xandertrax - i hear what blu is saying, but FBOs are needed
Felys - Vote4Nixon
Forgotten Planet - Patashu
Gym Leader - Xandertrax - approved on condition of tweaks
He's a Radical Rat - behanjc 
Hey, Ladies - dore - PA much?
Illumination of the Sky - Patashu - agree w/ jx
Kanon Medley - classic_rocker - accepted, but fix up blu stuff
Keep in Mind - behanjc - behan poops great simfiles
Lilium - Spitfire - accepted, fix bpm up
Master Maid - Kommisar
Nebula - Patashu
Night and Day - ElectricWerewolf - not a huge fan of the layering, especially early in the file.  2 runningmen do feel out of place w/ the file.  Also, pretty darn long.
Nomina Nuda Tenemus - bluguerrilla - this file sucks balls
RATO - dood gone krazee - seems just a wee bit overdone, but if we're going ot have one like this, this "song" is as good as any.
Shining Swird - behanjc - does feel overlayered.  the 32nd triplets in the stream are rough
Sirius - bejanjc 
Snake riddim - jokim - going to approve this.  if you want, fix up the jumps between ~400-550c.  those seem to be the biggest issue of the file.
Starwolf - Silvuh - I feel like this is overlayered throughout, but if jx/blu are ok w/ it, then so be it.
Tears of Remorse - Xandertrax - noooo...  I got 1 perf on this.
Techno Green Greens - ElectricWerewolf - accepting, but I think ending mini-jacks should be changed.  ps - yay Kirby!
The Lion's Dance - Silvuh - approved, but make blu's fixes
Thrash - Patashu - fun 8bit
We wish you a merry xmas - behanjc - it's good.  but for an xmas file, would have rather seen it shorter and not as layered.  oh well.


Played by Tass, Not Queue'd
BF2014 - maybe cut last 200 or so notes?
Chaoz Factory - fix up per notes
Choppastyle - felt most of it overstepped.  could be a fun easier song w/ cut.
DeVour - fix up, says you talked to blu already?
didj z - fix pr
eclipse luna - what judges said
freedom - what judges said
get out mah driveway - didn't test as per +. from blu and 4 from jx
inside the fire - the solo.  doesn't fit w/ rest of file.  tone it down a bit, at least off of left hand bias
largiloquent ... - some jacks are retarded
machine rhythm - didn't test as per +. from blu and 4.5 from jx
Naruto whatever - what judges said
Night bird - needs a cut.  also, what jx said.  beginning is fun.
omnishred - what judges said
push - agree w/ judges
quasar - agree w/ judges.  also, not a fan of how file is stepped at all.  especially everything from jumptrill to end.
{flying Away} - didn't test as per blah blah blah
RedPill - i can't believe i played this whole file.  i hate you.  whorli does not approve either.
Refraction - repetitive and long
rock rock rock (both spitfile and bmah) - do a collab!
r-type game over - no.  die.
sepia v2 - holy crap batman!  it's v1 all over again!
slow down - need some kind of cut.  also, blu, while i do hate a file like this...  had a AAA until ~150 notes from the end.
sly remastered - silvuh - 1. this is still sly, just better audio...  so v2.  2. not nearly different enough for a v2.
game boy fiend - i'm still convinced this file sucks.  maybe just bad song choice?


JX's notes
260 (trumaestro) [? / 5]
overall repetitive, songcut would be fine. also hands are overused (I can understand though).

Above The Rising Falls (XxHaseoDragonxX) [- / 1]
offsync at parts, many rhythms are wrong, random patterns

After Altair (Silvuh) [? / 4.5]
easy sim, but a bit inconsistent/weird for me

ahhhohhh (WTFBrandon) [? / 3.5]
missing some swing rhythms, PR could be better

Aqueous Transgression (XxHaseoDragonxX) [- / 1]
YNS, need to follow drums on some parts

Arrival to Earth (Orange Dude) [? / 2]
missing detailed rhythms for drums, PR could be better

Beaker Sunset v2 (hi19hi19) [+? / 6]
BPM off (faster than the music)
awkward pattern on m15 and some right-handed biased 64ths, misrhythm on m40/56
the rest is fine

BF2014 (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [? / 4.5]
didn't get some 16th rhythms (sorta inaudible), 8th + jumps parts are overall boring for me

Blood and Black Chocolate (cedolad) [- / 0]
full of bs notes, quit out

Bloodmeat [dore] [+. / 6.5] (11)
overall ok file, some hands are annoying tho
G-solo rhythms are poor but who cares

Blue Sky(GG_Guru) [- / 0]
blank

Blue-Violet (Orange Dude) [- / 0]
wrong bpm, no need for v2

Blue-Violet (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4]
v1 is better, no need for v2

bmv.578 (dag12) [+. / 6.5] (11)
jacks are pitch relevant, some 32nds/hands could be add on the climax though

Broken AirRow (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
end of m12/16 could be more consistent, m74- a bit overdoubled

Bu Xing (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
long 32nd rolls for timpani aren't needed IMO, hands are overused
cut repetitive parts maybe

Card House Dreamer (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (8)
ok I guess

CastleCrashers - Creature at the Mill (hi19hi19) [+? / 6.5]
hands on an easy file, not a bad usage and fun though.

Chaoz Fantasy (Vote4Nixon) [+? / 5.5]
interesting file. some PR for piano could be improved.
some parts are empty (m48, 72, etc), m81-86 16th notes for bass drums could be added

Chaoz Impact (DarkZtar) [? / 5]
ok, but it could be more consistent overall

Chaoz Japan (megamon88) [? / 5]
48ths are put of place and have bad patterns.
in m30-37 putting jumps for only bass drum is better.

Choppastyle (ElectricWerewolf) [+. / 6.5] (11)
ok overall, in some parts I felt there're better sounds to step/layering could be better

Cloud Control - Bynary Fission [? / 3]
at least needs a song cut if you step this as an easy file, pretty boring.
32nds grace notes, and some 24ths should be 16ths.

Confined(EnR&Gibson63) [? / 5]
overjumped/inconsistent jump placement. could be enjoyable if fixed

Congrats you pass (-KIDTHONG-) [? / 2.5]
yellow note on 4th, gap off, hands, rhythms on last arrows, etc

crescent_moon (stavie33) [? / 3.5]
many misrhythms, also felt there're better sounds to pick in many parts

Dead and Direct (Patashu) [+ / 8] (11)
seems rhythms are accurate, unique and fun

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+? / 6]
maybe need to remove some jumps and make the patterns rolly in 32nd sections

Didj Z (robertsona) [+. / 6.5] (10)
rhythms are complicated and seem mostly correct.. that's all about this.

Down But Not Out (_.Spitfire._) [? / 4.5]
inconsistent layering, there're a few misrhythms

Eclipse (Luna) (Puppet) [+. / 6.5] (12)
technically ok, but felt some long jacks/32nd trills are a bit too much for the song or other parts

Einstein Rosen Bridge Cut [dore] [+? / 6.5]
semi-long 64th rolls could be watered down (and actual rhythms are faster than 64th)
jack patterns in m75/79/86/88/89/91
32nd trill on m65 has extra note
otherwise, cool file

Etude for a dragon (championanwar) [? / 5]
felt minijacks are placed randomly, misrhythm in m36, missing some 32nds at the middle

Etude in E Major (Xandertrax) [+. / 6.5] (2)
could be improved a bit technically, but wanted easy files like this

Euphorium(akaFrOsTinG) [? / 2]
offsync, inconsistent/ some rhythms don't fit the song

Experiment (championanwar) [? / 4.5]
rhythms are unique and fine, need better layering

explode (Shadow 1800) [? / 2.5]
there're many misrhythms (most of 16ths, actually)

Extreme Dishwasher Race (SpammyMcSquirrel) [? / 3.5]
jack placement, need to follow drum part more accurately

Felys (Vote4Nixon) [+. / 6] (9)
gap late (also there's still room for color note syncing), weird layering on m25-33 just for me?

Forgotten Planet (Patashu) [+. / 6] (6)
PR could be better at parts, silence at the middle is lol

Freedom (Mr.Nothing) [? / 5]
PR is ok at parts but could be better, this song has so many repetitive parts imo

Funky Disco Typhoon (bmah) [+? / 5.5]
inconsistency on m17/21, felt a bit boring to play for me overall

GENTLEMAN (samurai7694) [? / 5]
there're some misrhythms (esp 48ths / 64ths), some hands/jacks are quite unnecessary
enjoyable at parts for a VS file though

Get Out Mah Driveway (psychozerosk8er) [? / 4]
a bit inconsistent overall, also felt a bit boring (maybe because of the song).

Gym Leader (RBY) (Xandertrax) [+. / 6] (9)
felt it lacks the layer for bass drum inconsistently (mainly 4ths)
maybe an ok file

Hand Throw [dore] [? / 4.5]
well ok this is a thing I can't pass. 
technically ok in most parts, but still patterns are beyond retarded 
(especially hand-jacks and super long jacks)

Happy Dreams (HighAndr0id) [+? / 5.5]
24ths are 32nds on m1-2, some minijack placements are annoying, or inconsistent

Hayden's OP (t-rogdor) [? / 3]
some misrhythms, patterns(32nds, PR), inconsistent layering

Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [? / 3.5]
PR could be better, some 24ths are out of place, songcut maybe

He's a Radical Rat (behanjc) [+ / 8.5] (12)
this is great.
tiny things for perfection, missing notes on m37/49, rhythms of some grace notes/m80-84 could be more accurate

Hey, Ladies [dore] [+. / 6] (7)
kinda weird vocal following, but ok

Highway Star (i love you) [? / 4]
rhythms are ok but instruments for notes are picked inconsistently, especially parts like m25-

Hot Soup (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [? / 5]
ok sync(gap late tho) and vocal follow, felt notes for drum parts are a bit inconsistent

Illumination of the Sky (Patashu) [+. / 7] (11)
overall fun, except it's a bit repetitive and has a few annoying patterns

Inside the Fire cut (dore) [+? / 6]
in m5-6 32nds could be added for drums, some vocal/guitar parts w/o layering are boring compared to other parts
patterns are nice imo

Introsphere (Extended) (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4]
I felt 16th placement is weird overall (should go with drum part I guess).

Jenovad Trance (Benny6p12) [- / 1.5]
gap early, rhythms aren't correct, weird one-hand trill, boring/long overall

Kanon Medley ~Metal Wings~ (Classic_Rocker) [+ / 7] (10)
this is decent

Keep in Mind (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (10)
rhythms are accurate, patterns in m69?

komorebi(#Number) [? / 3.5]
PR could be better, jump placement

La Campanella(who_cares973) [+? / 7]
nice sync, ok pitch relevancy, some parts could be fixed though
some jumps should be singles with grace notes, misrhythm on m49
m22-24, m32-36 should have 16ths, missing notes on m37, m46
jack pattern on m44/45, jumps are misplaced on m50, some jumps should be there on m52-
pattern could be better on m60-, etc

Lament of Mechanical Heart (hi19hi19) [? / 5]
kinda unique, but felt some parts are inconsistent/weird for me

Largiloquent Dithyramb [dore] [+? / 6]
funny concept, but offsync at parts/some jacks are retarded

Last Battle (Shadow 1800) [? / 2]
bad pattern choice/inconsistent layering  

Lilium (Strings & Piano Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+. / 6] (2)
a bit boring but technically good for a beginner file

Loot Burn Rape Kill Repeat (Not Available) [? / 3.5]
has misrhythms at parts, consistency/patterns could be better,

Machine Rhythm (Starfalcon176) [? / 4.5]
hand placement(basically not needed), rhythms for bursts

Master Maid (Kommisar[os]) [+. / 6.5] (10)
nothing special but decent sharpnel file

Naruto - Iron Dance and the White-Eyed Maiden (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
PR could be better (ex. m21-28 16th patterns like 28028 should be 28082. also 24th rolls)
others are fine I guess

Nebula (Patashu) [+. / 6.5] (8)
song is repetitive/a bit inconsistent due to that, but ok overall

Night And Day (ElectricWerewolf) [+ / 7.5] (11)
on m50 32nd runningman is weird, overall enjoyable file

Night Bird (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (9)
felt empty at parts but ok

Nightfall (cedolad) [? / 2.5]
some rhythms are wrong, patterns should be improved a lot overall

Now you're gone (XDark_PrinceX) [- / 0]
offsync

Nu-Island (FreezinIce) [- / 1]
patterns (esp minijacks for no reason), ONS/etc, many misrhythms

Oceans of Time (DarkZtar) [? / 5]
m24/44 should be 64ths, m57- needs climax theory, others are ok

Omnishred (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (10)
m6- missing some jacks, m10- some jack patterns are overdone
missing some rhythms for drums that would add some fun factors
overall enjoyable due to song choice though

Onyx(SpammymcSquirrel) [? / 4.5]
rhythms on m20, m46-48, etc
jump placement is weird at parts for me

Out There (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 4]
m12/31/49 - grace notes should be ahead of 4th
PR could be better, underlayered/inconsistent overall

Out There stepped by LJRoX [? / 2]
a lot of bs color notes/misrhythms, PR could be better

Push (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
the way of stepping might be ok but both song and steps are boring/repetitive

Quasar (Angelic Blue Mix) (bmah) [? / 5]
felt long, some parts are boring, song cut is preferable somehow
some 32nd bursts could be added

{Flying Away} (hi19hi19) [? / 4]
could see what 8th trills are going with but they make little sense
the concept of 8th stream is ok  but song could be shorter

Raging Terror (samurai7694) [+? / 5.5]
enjoyable jumpstream file, most hands aren't needed, jumps/16th rhythms could be more accurate

Rainy Day - Starfalcon176 [? / 5]
inconsistent layering at parts, rhythms on m35-36, etc (missing 24ths for drums)
song has potential though

RedPill (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (10)
annoying but funny concept. songcut is preferable though

Refraction (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+? / 5]
technically acceptable but felt song is way too repetitive

Reluctantly Accepting Temporary Overexhaustion (dood gone krazee) [+. / 7] (12)
m17-19 16ths missed, 24ths on m25-27 aren't exact rhythms, etc
overall accurate anyway, I'd accept this concept just for once

Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+? / 5.5]
Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (bmah) [+? / 5.5]

both files are similar, just spit's has more jacks and shorter. 
both files has some retarded patterns.. yea jacks/minijacks are technically correct 
but getting pretty annoying due to the overall patterns and repetitiveness.

R-Type Game Over (hi19hi19) [- / 1]

Sepia v2 (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (8)
need to check the difference from v1 (i don't remember)

Shining Sword (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (10)
sick file

Sirius-(behanjc) [+ / 8] (10)
good sync/rhythm/patterns

Slow Down (Xandertrax) [? / 4.5]
could be layered better imo, also felt a bit long

Sly (Remastered) (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (9)
Sly (Remastered) (Vote4Nixon) [> / 6]
Silvuh's - has a bit better consistency so yea
difficulty is close to ingame version of sly though

Snake riddim (jokim) [+? / 5.5]
not bad, layering/jump placement could be better tho

Stai With Me (-Barista-) [? / 3]
imo steps should go with drums mainly (so inconsistent)

Starwolf (rushyrulz) [? / 2.5]
Starwolf (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (10)
rush's - has many misrhythms, wrong bpm, not queueworthy
silvuh's - 24ths on m13/41/76?

Symphonic Shredding(Azafreak) [? / 3]
need better PR, more accurate rhythms

Taketori (Mr.Nothing) [? / 2]
misrhythms/bad sync, random jump placement and patterns

Tears of Remorse (Xandertrax) [+. / 6] (2)
syncing could be better at parts but ok

Techno Green Greens (ElectricWerewolf) [+. / 6.5] (8)
missing notes on m43. technically almost ok

Temple (Xandertrax) [? / 4.5]
sync isn't bad but both song and steps are pretty obscure (due to echo and stuff) and felt weird

Ten Minutes With Tass (customstuff) [- / 0]
had to quit out sry

Teraholic (Zap_Track) [? / 3.5]
m9 should be 24ths, also some color notes are inaccurate
some burst patterns/jump placement could be better

The Lion's Dance (Silvuh) [+ / 7] (7)
good PR, could be a bit more consistent but ok considering the dificulty

The Nintendo Concerto Part 1 (darph fluffy) [? / 4.5]
there're some misrhythms. PR/patterns could be better at parts

The Stupid Piano (i love you) [? / 3.5]
eh the title says everything. technically, layering/PR could be better

Thrash (Patashu) [+ / 8] (11)
pretty fun file

To luv me I for u (t-rogdor and samurai7694) [? / 3]
use bpm changes and red/blue/yellow notes at the beginning (plus offsync)
quad placement is kinda bad, misrhythms at parts

Toxiferous Dystopia (TC_Halogen) [= / 7] (11)
just an updated ver

Tribe Attacker (Zap_Track) [? / 4]
rhythms could be more accurate overall, want better layering (steps should go with bass drums more)

Trip Machine FAITH [eastsidenan09] [? / 4.5]
PR could be better, could use some jacks for melody and drums, kinda dull without those 
rhythms (for drums) are ok at parts, some are inconsistent

Trisection V2 (DarkZtar) [- / 0]
no file

Turbulence (AG Hi'per Mix) - Bynary Fission [? / 4]
inconsistent layering/jump placement could be better
some minijacks could be used

Twin Chevron Action Flash(remix)(GG_Guru) [- / 0]
offsync

Ultimate Drum Set Solo of Doom (stavie33) [? / 2]
didn't review seriously because the music is pretty inaudible.. better sound please
plus, offsync

Usatei (dag12) [- / 0]
DQ

Versatile (Xandertrax) [? / 5]
32nds parts are basically well done
really don't like the transition between m16 and m17 (felt it's against the musical intensity).
layering on m33- could be better, 8th parts are overall boring, jacks could be used

We wish you a merry Christmas (Jazzy Groove) (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (10)
xmas file oh well

White Skies (Club Mix) (Professor Raine) [? / 2.5]
rhythms should be more accurate overall (16ths, 32nds)
most hands are out of place, some pattern choices are bad

Windmill Jazz (robertsona) [+? / 5.5]
decent easy file but PR/rhythms could be better at parts

WOWWOW 220 (dag12) [+? / 5.5]
misrhythms, especially 24ths for fast organ could be 48ths

X (akaFrOsTinG) [? / 2.5]
a lot of fun rhythms are missed, patterns should be better

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon & bluguerrilla) [? / 5]
PR could be better (parts like m9-, not sufficient yet)
need a first note on m29/77, m49-56 is boring, m29-32, m77-80 should go with hihat
also, there're are some underlayered parts

Nomina Nuda Tenemus (bluguerrilla) [+. / 6.5] (12)
some bursts are evil as always, but it got decently fun as a hard file


Blu's Notes
260 (trumaestro) [+?]
_
. For the short rhythms and rolls 1324 is fine but the first long one should be either 1234 or 4321 or a spin if you'd really like
. You missed rhythms in the intro (more 32nds)
. The manually synced notes could be better, 64ths probably
. Don't think this is FMO, it might be more fun if it were stepped a little more sparingly (less overlayered)
. The JS repeating pattern is probably good enough, would be more fun with (12)/(34) jumps

Above The Rising Falls (XxHaseoDragonxX) [?]
_
. Ok this file is loads better than the last time you submitted it but it still has some things that need fixing
. Even the the sound might crest in volume near a yellow note you should still step it at a red note (like in the intro)
. The piano part needs much better PR
. The 16th pattern near the end is a more complicated set of colored notes but 16ths might be ok for this difficulty
. After this you missed 16th rhythms that could be fun
. Very long but love the song
. The consistency in jump usage could be much better too, keep working!

After Altair (Silvuh) [+]
_
. MISRHYTHMS AND LAYERED WRONG j/k easy file, pretty fun and short

ahhhohhh (WTFBrandon) [???]
_
. I hate you.  Isn't one WoW meme song (or whatever this is) enough? D:<
. Misrhythms (16ths that should be 24ths)
. Manual sync ok
. Blank ending?
. Layering very weird

Aqueous Transgression (XxHaseoDragonxX) [?]
_
. Yellow Note Syndrome, fix the gap, copy and paste the notes
. Again you missed rhythms (sounded like 32nds, just listen carefully)
. Work on the layering and PR more.

Arrival to Earth (Orange Dude) [?]
_
. Wow the PR was really terrible, fix it
. The layering was good enough for an easy file

Beaker Sunset v2 (hi19hi19) [?]
_
. m40 colored notes wrong, should be 134.3.2 all 32nds (or some variation of that pattern, whatever) if that makes sense
. m48 why not step the stuff after the fast stuff?
. PR so terrible
. m56 should be 32nds into 48ths
. m68 should be 16ths not 12ths >|
. Offsync at the end

BF2014 (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+]
_
. Don't know if you actually took out some doubles but it seems like you did, overall I think I like it better than before

Blood and Black Chocolate (cedolad) [-]
_
. It's all misrhythms
 
Bloodmeat (dore) [+]
_
. 15/16 messes me up jesus
. You kids and your crazy RB

Blue Sky (GG_Guru) [!]
_
. Blank

Blue-Violet (Orange Dude) [-]
_
. Wrong BPM

Blue-Violet (Vote4Nixon) [>]
_
. Still not as good as Silvuh's

bmv.578 (dag12) [+.]
_
. Would be cool to push some of those BDs in there like Kit did in Dazzling Destiny
. Really fun jacks, overall good job on a complex song (btw it's OSTER Project)

Broken AirRow (hi19hi19) [?]
_
. Boring/Repetative and overstepped...

Bu Xing (hi19hi19) [?]
_
. ****ing arrow ****storm make an easier file this is wack so says i

Card House Dreamer (Silvuh) [+.]
_
. Check some of the double placement to vocals (lack of in some of the chorus really) but overall good choice of patterns to keep it easy

CastleCrashers - Creature at the Mill (hi19hi19) [+?]
_
. Missed some of the repetative 16ths and put in some that I can't hear no matter how hard I try
. Also hands in non-FMO  

Chaoz Fantasy (Vote4Nixon) [+.]
_
. This style of stepping feels choppy for the song but is overall good
. People might not like this file but whatever

Chaoz Impact (DarkZtar) [?]
_
. Step the entire song, that was a terrible point to stop stepping
. Overall you messed up the layering, missed some doubles, put in doubles where there shouldn't be any
. 16th patterns (JS) were way over the top in terms of difficulty compared to the rest of the file

Chaoz Japan (megamon88) [?]
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. 48ths should be 32nds (64ths really but pls no)
. Too many unjustified jacks in the 12th section
. Many misrhythms in the section after
. I believe you can turn this into a good file
. m58 bad bad bad generally don't put steps to wooshing noises, it just doesn't work

Choppastyle (ElectricWerewolf) [+.]
_
. Woo fun
. Missed some rhythms in the intro but it's ok
. Overlayered in one section near the end, like m107-wherever
. Overall well placed jacks
. Didn't like the rhythmic feeling of m91-99 or so, understepping this section a bit would be better (leaving out the bass drum or something), this is more of a 'if you want to' comment, long comment is long

Cloud Control - Bynary Fission [?]
_
. 32nds were wrong
. PR was dong and needs to be much better
. Overall this song needs a more fun and more challenging file (even for an easierish file this wasn't good enough)
. Missed many rhythms in the strings, too

Confined(EnR&Gibson63) [?]
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. No minijacks if you're doing freeform or trills to BD already, it makes no sense
. Also, no permission
. Intro JS made me lol, so much harder than the rest of the sim
. Overall PR in doubles not very good

Congrats you pass (-KIDTHONG-) [-]
_
. YNS
. Misrhythms rampant
. Quad at end lol no
. Ending 4 notes should be 3 notes and no they're not 48ths

crescent_moon (stavie33) [-]
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. So many misrhythms in this I'm not even going to try, which is a shame because this song is cool
. Seriously this simfile needs so much work it's not even funny

Dead and Direct (Patashu) [+]
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. m63 is messed up rhythmically (misplaced 64ths), might want to check other rhythms if it actually matters to you
. Missed some bass in the quiet part
. Ending drags on a bit
. Most of this is non-issue, this file is super fun 

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+.]
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. Talked to you about it, it's still a ****storm of arrows in terms of layering so you're going to try something different
 
Didj PVC (robertsona) [+?]
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. Ok so the PR is atrocious, just need to pay more attention to the sounds, not telling you to do jacks or anything but match the patterns to the kinds of noises, etc
. Overall, you got most of the rhythms right, missed one m36 and possibly in other places, go through it again at .4x
. m44 don't like that 16th minijack but I guess it's ok

Down But Not Out (_.Spitfire._) [+?]
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. m43 that last yellow note goes to nothing
. m72 should not be 48ths, it should be a jump then a step 1 16th later on each one except the last, which should be 2 16ths later
. m76 should be 24ths not 48ths
. m78 no 48ths
. m79 no 64ths
. m82 missed a 16th note after the JS
. m88 and m101 32nds or 64ths (4 of them) would be better than 48ths
. m102 roll starts too early
. m108-109 no 64ths
. m120-121 no 48ths
. Fade out too long

Eclipse (Luna) (Puppet aka gnr61 it's too late now ha ha ha) [+?]
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. m30 trill is right but weird with the layering, maybe the melody should take precidence here
. m38 and m52 why a trill when all the other patterns are rolls?
. Fade out the stepping better
. m41-43 boring as hell

Einstein Rosen Bridge Cut (dore) [+]
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. I like the 64ths in there, they're not too hard

Etude for a dragon (championanwar) [-]
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. Not different enough and also missed rhythms (32nds) and v2 would have to have PR
. overall it's not a terrible file but not different enough (and the v1 isn't bad either so...)

Etude in E Major (Xandertrax) [+]
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. Good for an easy file (I'd prefer both 'hands' stepped but I think it's ok how it is)
 
Euphorium (akaFrOsTinG) [?]
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. Ok this simfile is a good start but it needs a ton of work
. The layering (jump placement mostly) is almost all inconsistent or wrong
. Some of the rhythms in the intro were forced
. Jack placement has to be consistent in the layering

Experiment (championanwar) [+?]
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. m49+ you missed some 32nds and 16ths, m49 should go 1...(24)...3...(12)...1...(24).123..1..4, if that doesn't make sense AIM me
. the lack of PR is fine i think as it plays pretty well

explode (Shadow 1800) [-]
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. Too many misrhythms to list
. Needs way better PR and layering

Extreme Dishwasher Race (SpammyMcSquirrel) [?]
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. Tons of misrhythms, too many to list again
. Some PR choices are awkward (too many jumps)
. Overall I believe if you got some help with this sim or worked on it a ton more it could be a really cool file
. Errors in the manual sync at the end, slow it down more and check

Felys (Vote4Nixon) [+]
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. Some people might not like that you didn't step the BD in some parts but I thought it played well
. Overall this is really really fun

Forgotten Planet (Patashu) [+]
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. The only thing I'd suggest is make the 12th minitrills two-handed for a-little-easier-ness but overall really fun easier file

Freedom (Mr.Nothing) [+.]
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. The layering could have been more interesting like, first single notes, then 8th note trills, then 8th note JS, etc, more of a gradient but overall I think it's ok
. Is this is a cut or does it just end like that?

Funky Disco Typhoon (bmah) [+?]
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. m9 (14)2341 should be (14).341 and the similar patterns later should be adjusted as well
. m35 JS (even though it's right) feels wrong to play, I'd suggest taking out the single 8th notes and just stepping the jumps and single yellows
. The jacks feel out of place compared to the difficulty and layering style
. Overall I feel like this file could be much better even though there are few 'mistakes'

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon & bluguerrilla) [+]
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. Overall I find the stream and JS much nicer now that it's more spread out visually
. I'm convinced that stepping the 32nds would ruin the strict layering of this file

GENTLEMAN (samurai7694) [?]
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. Overall overstepped, plays terrible
. Lots of the 64ths that you stepped should go unstepped
. The jacks felt out of place compared to the rest of the file
. omg cut it, it's painfully long
. Also, overall this sim feels half-finished, like parts are good and other parts are crap, needs much more polishing

Get Out Mah Driveway (psychozerosk8er drunk mode) [+.]
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. lol have you played this file sober?
. The 'hard' part plays well but the rest of the file isn't as good as that part meaning the rest of the file needs better layering
. Then again, it's pretty easy so it might be ok, plays well at least
. wut up bitch you in mah driveway around these parts we do things my way

Gym Leader (RBY) (Xandertrax) [+.]
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. m42 missed BD yellow note at the end of the measure
. bb in 2 months pokemans
. missed some synth 8th notes in some parts, listen carefully

Hand Throw (dore) [???]
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. I bet one person can pass this in sm and no one would ever FC this in FFR
. I don't think I could pass it in FFR
. This file is kinda hard
. But the layering and PR were ok so I should + it right? ... ... ...

Happy Dreams (HighAndr0id) [+?]
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. 48ths rolls feel like too much and don't play well
. Why did you do manual sync at the end when you are using ddreamstudio? sync them with bpm changes, it's easy right?
. Feels overstepped, without jacks it would be better
. Overall really fun just a bit much for the song maybe

Hayden's OP (t-rogdor) [--]
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. Not only did you do a terrible job stepping this but you didn't step the wall
. I claim this song will never be in FFR, ever

Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [?]
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. m35 not 24ths, 32nds, same mistake near the end too
. m36 echo patterns should be 16ths
. m37+ missed tons of 32nds like the ones you stepped, listen to the synth closely
. Ending offsync
. Ending also boring before the blue notes at the end
. PR generally shoddy, make it not shoddy, make it good

He's a Radical Rat (behanjc) [++] <-- seriously
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. Yeah, this is one of the funnest files I've ever played
. Awesome song too

Hey, Ladies (dore) [+]
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. Skill Token: Be rude to every woman you meet to unlock this token!
. lol McFlurry
. Some of the not-manual sync to vocals isn't perfect but it's not that noticeable so whatever
. Damn, this song is so amazing

Highway Star (i love you) [?]
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. Most of the 16th patterns need both PR and rhythms fixed as there are many many mistakes
. Missed many jumps throughout the file
. Get some help with this file, it's a cool song

Hot Soup (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [?]
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. Sync needs to be 10x better (it's off in many places), get someone to help you use ddreamstudio to sync this
. Take out that last jump
. Overall the file plays pretty well but a lot of the rhythms feel off because of the sync, can't really judge it well till the sync is fixed

Illumination of the Sky (Patashu) [+]
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. Fun and simple file, nothing fancy

Inside the Fire cut (dore) [+]
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. I like the vocal-jumped ending, great progression in layering now

Introsphere (Extended) (Vote4Nixon) [?]
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. The rhythmic choices didn't play well in the intro and right after the intro
. Felt overstepped in many parts
. Some misrhythms in the 16ths, hard to explain here
. This sim could be a lot better

Jenovad Trance (Benny6p12) [?]
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. Some boring pattern choices in the 8th note stream (like the really long 123432 pattern)
. That long right-handed trill should be a two-handed trill
. In the end of m59 and all of m60 lots of the red and blue notes should be yellow, slow down the song and listen, this happens a few times throughout the file
. You should cut this song at like... 175 seconds in
. This seem needs a lot of improvement but it could be a really fun file if you get it right

Kanon Medley ~Metal Wings~ (Classic_Rocker) [+.]
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. The PR could use improvement overall (esp.in the JS, just thinking of the jumps here, the patterns were fun)
. Last 3 notes [23(14)] would be cooler as (14)(23)(14)
. Overall this is 'acceptable' but the PR needs some polishing (shouldn't take too long, PR wasn't _really_ bad, just lots of little mistakes), really fun simfile

Keep in Mind (behanjc) [+]
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. Jesus... Overall great.

komorebi(#Number) [?]
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. BPM should be 200 the entire time (would be better as 100, select all, compress x2)
. Overall this file would be much more enjoyable with really good PR and no jumps
. Should step the ending guitar
. I kind of like it as an easier file but if you want you could layer the two guitars somehow but you don't have to
. Get someone to help you with this file

La Campanella(who_cares973) [+?]
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. Ok so this file is pretty good but it needs some work
. You left a lot unstepped, some solo jumps that should be JS, some 3-note patterns (jump-step-step) that should be JS as well
. Sometimes you seemed to get lazy with the double placement and PR, fix it
. I'm not being specific because this stuff is all over the file
. lol that trill
. Check the sync, there was YNS in there, maybe check the sheet music to make sure you've got the tempo right for the time
. Don't be afraid to use hands

Lament of Mechanical Heart (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. m12 missed a yellow note near the end (to that airy sound...)
. Ok overall this file has tons of missed and misrhythms, recheck it all

Largiloquent Dithyramb (dore) [+]
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. Some of the sync felt late in parts but I think it was because of the band not being able to play as tightly because this song is nuts... So, the sync may be ok
. Damn 200 bpm jacks are hard...
. Kawaii desu desu desu~~~~~~~~~~~

Last Battle (Shadow 1800) [--]
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. Terrible file, you'd have to do it over completely
. Like, seriously, it offended me >: |

Lilium (Strings & Piano Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+]
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. Make bpm either 1/2 or 1/4 that (1/4 will introduce some BNS but you could fix it)
. P.S. easy file, good enough PR

Loot Burn Rape Kill Repeat (Not Available) [+?]
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. m27 no 24ths, just a 343(12) all 12ths
. Once the intense part starts you _need_ to step that guitar (the 24ths)
. Other than that it's pretty tight, just do some double checks overall on the PR and jump placement and it'll be awesome : )

Machine Rhythm (Starfalcon176) [+.]
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. m30 the doubles should start on a blue note
. Ok the hands and quads are neat but I'm not sure it's FMO
. Overall this is a really cool file in that it's a meld of technicalness and pad file stuff, if you know what I mean

Master Maid (Kommisar[os]) [+]
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. m40 should be an orange then green note (but a later green note than you had) (also later when that happens again)
. Overall a different but good way to step a sharpnel song, I think

Naruto - Iron Dance and the White-Eyed Maiden (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. Some of those 24ths are wrong but it doesn't _really_ matter
. lolnaruto, easy but whatever not a 3 ha ha ha

Nebula (Patashu) [+]
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. Weird, it's just like Monstrous Turtles but slightly easier
. Overall really fun and a good reflection of the song
. PR seemed a bit shoddy in places but it doesn't matter (probably just seemed so because of the layering style, felt right so whatever)

Night And Day (ElectricWerewolf) [+]
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. m94 missed some 32nds to BD
. Thank you for not stepping all of the 32nds, the ones you did step were super-fun
. Probably your funnest (heh) file

Night Bird (behanjc) [+.]
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. m116 red note at beginning of stream doesn't feel right (better to not step drums at all in this section)
. Overall I think it might be more fun if you step some more of the double bass with some index patterns (at least in the climax part before the slower part)
. Also, rly fun file guy

Nightfall (cedolad) [-]
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. Bad PR, Bad rhythms, overall needs a ton of improvement

Nomina Nuda Tenemus (bluguerrilla) [#]
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. Wow so much easier now! I may even be able to FC this in FFR now x100!

Now you're gone (XDark_PrinceX) [-]
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. ha ha ha 480 BPM, this is all so wrong sorry ctrl+r

Nu-Island (FreezinIce) [-]
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. Multiple charts but one is blank but still >: |
. Gap wrong, hence tons of orange notes, fix the sync, then we'll talk

Oceans of Time (DarkZtar) [?]
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. Slowdown section needs better jump placement (missed some piano) and better PR
. 48ths should be 64ths
. Might be good to incorporate more piano in the broken JS parts

Omnishred (hi19hi19) [?]
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. m6 and m8 missed guitar jacks
. left out some drums that could be fun 24th rolls
. Missed some jumps in m46+
. Didn't step differently at the climax of the song so it felt really empty there
. Overall I feel this could a better simfile
. Parts felt offsync, maybe slight bpm change when it goes to 4/4?

Onyx (SpammymcSquirrel) [+?]
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. BNS >: |
. Overall I think this is better than it was last time but still needs work in the section where you have mostly 8th notes, a few jumps there to that heavy synth

Out There (Coolboyrulez0) [?]
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. The PR is wack.  That's right, wack.  Fix it, mensch.
. Some of the rhythms need to be fixed, recheck them.
. You missed some grace notes that you were stepping in the beginning and then stopped.
. Might be cool if you stepped more of the 24ths not as just 3-note rolls but as fun index-stream or something.  Just something more interesting.
. Might also want to consider doing a little more layering as well

Out There (LJRoX) [-]
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. Not 32nds, 24ths, so many misrhythms D:
. Too many jumps wow
. Not as good as CBR0's

Push (Vote4Nixon) [+]
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. Cool concept, intro felt long
. Would it be possible to make the outro exactly the same steps as the intro just reversed?

Quasar (Angelic Blue Mix) (bmah) [+.]
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. Would be good if you cut it at 178.6 seconds
. Overall I liked the progression in layering, the jumptrill might be a bit much but I know you like to use that kind, maybe (12)(34) instead?
. Overall the broken stream is fine even though it's really constant stream but broken is more fun
. Lol homage

R-Type Game Over (hi19hi19) [+]
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. lol short FMO

Raging Terror (samurai7694) [?]
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. Way too layered, especially during the guitar solo, should just step guitar with PR patterns
. Dynamic BPM needs better sync
. Last note way too long off, gets boring

Rainy Day (Starfalcon176) [+?]
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. The cut seemed a bit strange but it might be ok, haven't heard the whole song
. Missed some rhythms (24ths) to drums in the middle
. The one-handed minitrills might be a bit much, make them 13, 23, or 24 minitrills
. Other than that this is a neat file but needs a bit of work

RedPill (hi19hi19) [-]
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. 22 seconds of note-silence. really?
. hahahahahahahahahahah no
. ilyhi19 but really boringest file ever

Refraction (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+.]
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. Pretty good I guess, kinda droning but that's more the song's fault
. Not sure about some of those rhythms check them
. More fun at 2x :p

Reluctantly Accepting Temporary Overexhaustion (dood gone krazee) [+]
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. I don't even care about the few rhythms you missed there shouldn't be any more notes in this simfile
. Some of those 48th walls don't really feel necessary even though they're right
. lol this file

Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+.]
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. Those 5 note jacks are harddd
. I'd like this file 10x more with zero jacks
. I'd comment on how I like this cut better but I won't because I made this cut. :p

Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (bmah) [+.]
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. I'd like this file 10x more with zero jacks
. The length of this one is a bit much
. Wow that trill pls no
. Don't like the jack into the quad at the end
. Both of these files are queue-able but a combined forces file would be sah-weet

Sepia v2 (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. Overall the pattern choice felt repetative and boring
. Not different enough from the v1 to warrant a v2 (not good enough either)

Shining Sword (behanjc) [+.]
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. Cool file, felt overlayered at parts but good enough really

Sirius-(behanjc) [+]
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. Some of the jacks felt unneeded (when caused by layering) but low bpm makes that fine because it's really fun

Slow Down (Xandertrax) [+]
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. wow that's a lot of 8th jacks haha tass is gonna <3 this file
. Ok so we don't get many in this difficulty range but it's neat because it's technical and rather easy, a bit long but there's no way to cut it really
. Interesting file

Sly (Remastered) (Silvuh) [+.]
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. Jacks to wayyy too subtle of a sound
. Some choppy rhythmic choices, seems like the bass isn't always 5 notes long, if it is it's really subtle some of the time

Sly (Remastered) (Vote4Nixon) [>]
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. Some rhythmic errors I think, there's a lot going on in this song
. Ok, both of these files are good but I liked v4n's style better because of the flow but I'm fairly certain v4n's has some mistakes
. And I definitely like both of these files better than the one currently in-game
. Some parts identical to in-game file

Snake riddim (jokim) [+.]
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. what I don't know who you are and you submitted a pretty good file what! : )
. Some of the patterns are a bit repetative but that's ok because it mirrors the song
. The PR isn't the best but that keeps it interesting, honestly (also not too hard to a sim so it's cool)

Stai With Me (-Barista-) [?]
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. Many many PR and layering and rhythmic mistakes all over this chart
. Has potential though, seems unfinished, work on it more

Starwolf (rushyrulz) [-]
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. BPM incorrect 

Starwolf (Silvuh) [+]
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. I really liked the JS
. Mostly consistent without being annoying

Symphonic Shredding(Azafreak) [+?]
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. um, did you make this cut or is this what the song does?  If so, terrible place to cut it.
. Layering in the doubled BPM part is terrible
. Overall I think a different cut for this is warranted, maybe drop the bpm halved part or something, it's pretty boring

Taketori (Mr.Nothing) [?]
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. Jacks, no
. Gap wrong, get rid of that stop
. Needs 100x more layering and better PR, needs to be better and more interesting (less boring) overall

Tears of Remorse (Xandertrax) [+.]
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. m31 missed a note
. Sync good enough I think, gap seemed a little off but overall good enough

Techno Green Greens (ElectricWerewolf) [+.]
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. m28 last two jumps should go (14)(14)
. lol this song is terrible
. meh those jacks at the end

Temple (Xandertrax) [+?]
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. BNS
. missed some notes, should step more of the echoes, would make it more flowy, like the song

Ten Minutes With Tass (customstuff) [-]
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. lol needs to be something more than just synced notes to tass, needs like, what hi19 wrote

Teraholic (Zap_Track) [?]
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. 24ths, not 32nds
. Missed tons of steps
. Please don't step those 48ths, too hard compared to the rest of the file, maybe the short ones but no walls

The Lion's Dance (Silvuh) [+.]
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. Missed violin that you were stepping throughout
. Why not step that triangle or whatever it is, cymbal, m41 or so :p
. Good otherwise and easy fixes so, yeah

The Nintendo Concerto Part 1 (darph fluffy) [?]
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. Parts need wayyyy better PR and missed tons of rhythms and needs better layering overall
. Cool song though, makes me want to mario
. Recording hurt my ears though D:
. Work on it more, maybe get some help and it'll be a cool file

The Stupid Piano (i love you) [?]
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. Needs PR and layering fo realz
. Terrible song D:

Thrash (Patashu) [+]
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. Wow rly cool, no need to make this a colored note mess either, like it lots

To luv me I for u (t-rogdor and samurai7694) [-]
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. lol sync the beginning correctly wow...
. Missed tons of sounds sacrificed due to layering, making it little fun
. Slowdown part has more swung notes than you stepped
. wow cut this jesus

Toxiferous Dystopia (TC_Halogen) [+]
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. Missed some jumps to snare before the quiet part in the middle
. Maybe halve the bpm during the hip-hop beat section? then double again near like m100
. Missed more jumps in the last section
. Still good enough for queue, imo

Tribe Attacker (Zap_Track) [+?]
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. Sync to vocals wrong
. Check some of those 32nds and the rest of your rhythms, double check them
. Don't like the notes at the end to the noises

Trip Machine FAITH (eastsidenan09) [+?]
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. No 32nds later in the file (the ones like m70)
. Left out some 16ths to BD that could be fun, if you want
. Some of the drums sound swung but it might not matter for the playability
. Missed some cool stuff near the end of the song

Trisection V2 (DarkZtar) [!]
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. No Chart

Turbulence (AG Hi'per Mix) (Bynary Fission) [?]
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. Uh too like the original and not as cool

Twin Chevron Action Flash (remix) (GG_Guru) [-]
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. BPM sooooo wrong

Ultimate Drum Set Solo of Doom (stavie33) [?]
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. Too quiet denied! j/k
. Some of the hands and jacks make no sense at all
. Some of the PR wasn't right

Usatei (dag12) [-]
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. Not yours D]:<

Versatile (Xandertrax) [+?]
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. Layering jumps to synth would be cooler
. Left out some piano later in the sim
. Overall nothing really wrong but this could be much better ...

We wish you a merry Christmas (Jazzy Groove) (behanjc) [+]
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. Hello Christmas file

White Skies (Club Mix) (Professor Raine) [+?]
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. 32nds, although they fit, were retarded as trills
. Overstepped
. Not FMO material song, -hands

Windmill Jazz (robertsona) [+?]
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. Missed some piano and PR could be better
 
WOWWOW 220 (dag12) [+?]
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. Missed tons of drums that would be fun (that you stepped sometimes, but not all)
. Double the BPM maybe so that the tempo fits lol 220 ffs

X (akaFrOsTinG) [?]
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. BNS
. Forced stream, meh patterns overall
. Trills boring

{Flying Away} (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. Cool as an easy file, maybe someone will make a hard v2
. Some parts boring but not boring enough to reject
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