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**Xiaounlimited** · 11-26-2008, 09:26 PM

(Just502) ZUN - Border of Life
reject
Beginning is EXTREMELY boring and repetitive. I understand the song is somewhat so itself, but you could have layered it to be both slightly easier, and more rhythmically interesting. 8 note 16th bursts for like a minute? Yeah, no. Beginning plays like a 10, middle is like an 8, then the ending is a 12. Relatively inconsistent.

(Just502) ZUN - Necrofantasia
reject
Would've made a FAR better FA file (9 or 10) than a 12/13. File didn't seem fun at all; layering was once again, inconsistent. Some jumps seemed arbitrary (didn't emphasize anything significant, which they generally should). Went offsync near the end, by a few ms.

(Just502) ZUN - Doll Maker of Burucesti
reject
m94: Awkward step.
m96: Awkward step.
m98+: Why did you understep it?
Slightly offsync. Probably the best of the three files, but it's still quite repetitive. The song choice is a rather bland. IMHO.

(ddr_f4n) danmaq - Night Falls ~ Evening Star (CtC Mix)
would like revision
What the hell was that ending? That was brutal. Not quite 14 material, but still really ****ing hard nonetheless. Now, that's not the problem I'd want to address; rather, it's simply the run itself. Is it going to anything? I'm running surround sound on high volume, and it seemed like an arbitrary run more than anything else.

I personally think if you're going to stick in a run like that that goes to nothing, leave it 'til the very end. Extending it that long for no reason is pretty dumb. Other than that, the file is beautiful. I'd just like to see that ending reworked.

(ddr_f4n) IOSYS - Wouldn't Cucumber Flavoured Beer Be Nice to Drink?! ~ Everyone Can Know! This Technology Solves Every Problem! (man wtf that title is long also rofl you spelled flavour with a U)
would like revision
m88-96: 16ths are really pointless. I say forego them, and stick with eighth notes.
Hands in the file are completely unnecessary and virtually impossible to do properly in time. Recently, I've come to learn to love hands that you NEED to cheat with your feet (I've been playing Pump a bit too much), but they emphasize aspects of the song. Your hands don't, so I request you don't use them unless necessary.

(Gundam-Dude) Unknown Artist - Flowering Night
would like revision
HOLY ****, PATRICK. I'M STUNNED. YOUR FILE DIDN'T SUCK. However:

1) m9-16: You didn't step the 16th notes that should go to the violin.
m17-24: The triples should actually be five notes long.
2) Syncing issues. The file goes really offsync, but nothing I can't fix. This is why I use notepad to edit stops manually.

Revise step 1; step 2 I'll handle afterwards.

(Professor Raine) t+pazoline - World's End Yama Xanadu
No.

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Happy now?

11-26-2008, 09:26 PM	#151
Xiaounlimited Eaguru Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Brampton, ON, Canada Age: 34 Posts: 2,832	Re: Touhou Pad Pack II (Just502) ZUN - Border of Life reject Beginning is EXTREMELY boring and repetitive. I understand the song is somewhat so itself, but you could have layered it to be both slightly easier, and more rhythmically interesting. 8 note 16th bursts for like a minute? Yeah, no. Beginning plays like a 10, middle is like an 8, then the ending is a 12. Relatively inconsistent. (Just502) ZUN - Necrofantasia reject Would've made a FAR better FA file (9 or 10) than a 12/13. File didn't seem fun at all; layering was once again, inconsistent. Some jumps seemed arbitrary (didn't emphasize anything significant, which they generally should). Went offsync near the end, by a few ms. (Just502) ZUN - Doll Maker of Burucesti reject m94: Awkward step. m96: Awkward step. m98+: Why did you understep it? Slightly offsync. Probably the best of the three files, but it's still quite repetitive. The song choice is a rather bland. IMHO. (ddr_f4n) danmaq - Night Falls ~ Evening Star (CtC Mix) would like revision What the hell was that ending? That was brutal. Not quite 14 material, but still really ***ing hard nonetheless. Now, that's not the problem I'd want to address; rather, it's simply the run itself. Is it going to anything? I'm running surround sound on high volume, and it seemed like an arbitrary run more than anything else. I personally think if you're going to stick in a run like that that goes to nothing, leave it 'til the very end. Extending it that long for no reason is pretty dumb. Other than that, the file is beautiful. I'd just like to see that ending reworked. (ddr_f4n) IOSYS* - Wouldn't Cucumber Flavoured Beer Be Nice to Drink?! ~ Everyone Can Know! This Technology Solves Every Problem! (man wtf that title is long also rofl you spelled flavour with a U) would like revision m88-96: 16ths are really pointless. I say forego them, and stick with eighth notes. Hands in the file are completely unnecessary and virtually impossible to do properly in time. Recently, I've come to learn to love hands that you NEED to cheat with your feet (I've been playing Pump a bit too much), but they emphasize aspects of the song. Your hands don't, so I request you don't use them unless necessary. (Gundam-Dude) Unknown Artist - Flowering Night would like revision HOLY ***, PATRICK. I'M STUNNED. YOUR FILE DIDN'T SUCK. However: 1) m9-16: You didn't step the 16th notes that should go to the violin. m17-24: The triples should actually be five* notes long. 2) Syncing issues. The file goes really offsync, but nothing I can't fix. This is why I use notepad to edit stops manually. Revise step 1; step 2 I'll handle afterwards. (Professor Raine) t+pazoline - World's End Yama Xanadu No. --- Happy now? __________________ Why would you put that in your signature? You've lost your signature rights for a month. (You'll get them back on March 10th, 2012.)