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Originally Posted by All_That_Chaz

Well done. It was obviously believable. Wouldn't mind some expansion on your protagonist's personality because you haven't really established him as a complete creepjob, or if this is something out of the ordinary for him.

Well that's what I was going for sort of. I wanted the reader to sort of feel sorry for / pity the narrator at first, and then feel progressively more creeped out. I was purposely vague as to the narrator's intentions / level of creepjob because it's the nature of stalkers and the reason you don't just talk to strangers. You don't know who they are. I did mention right at the beginning that he had never stalked anyone before so it sort of gives you a frame of reference at least.