10-7-2008, 07:05 PM
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Age: 39
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Re: 1555WD
Well done. It was obviously believable. Wouldn't mind some expansion on your protagonist's personality because you haven't really established him as a complete creepjob, or if this is something out of the ordinary for him.
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