[Silvuh]

{Big Boss} (Silvuh) [?]
-Badly overlayered 12th jack part, inconsistencies throughout
-The other one is way better
{Big Boss} (Silvuh) [+? / 5.5]
missing jumps on m1/m5, 24th on m7 isn't needed.
misrhythms on m10/14/42 (actually 48th + 64th, and need better pattern/modification)
some jumps on the yellow note/jack placement are weird.
{Big Boss} (Silvuh) [?] - many misrhythms, seemingly inconsistent jack usage, weird double placement, mixed 12ths and 16ths very awkward

It's upsetting knowing that you didn't like the polyrhythm in {Big Boss}. It's musically accurate and (at least in my eyes) quite a fun pattern.

Paragraph that doesn't matter:
m1/m5: I intentionally didn't put jumps there, because I didn't want it interrupting with the 16ths.
m7: There's definitely the sound on the 24 there, so I don't see why not.
m10/14/42: I knew it was 48ths and 64ths, but don't you think that would have been too hard? I didn't think 32nds would be too hard for the file because of the polyrhythm..
jump jacks: The 8th there echoes sometimes, so I put jacks there. And there's a jump when there's also a drum beat there.
What's weird about the double placement? I placed doubles on that one noise that begins the song (except for m 1/5 and those parts where there wasn't any, so I put jumps to the other prevailing beat).

Brenton (bmah) had played both V4N's and my files, and he guessed you would like V4N's more, that mine didn't have any chance compared to his... He also guessed you wouldn't like the jump-jacks or the polyrhythm... Blah, I shouldn't have bothered sending in the file.

Arf... I'll fix up Moonlight River and send that in as my resubmit. I'll correct Lost in Mind and Blue-Violet some and send those in two again... And, hah, I need to send in Procrastination on a Paper again because there were some rolls I should have changed earlier.
And for the three new files, I'll send in Rain, After Altair (an easy file), and ... I don't know, Ninja Lad or Spacedust or something.