[Silvuh]

Originally Posted by SethSquall

Ore wa kawaii onna no ko ga suki desu.
おれわかわいいおんあのこがすきです

Please tell me I got that right lmao. Although I think "onna no ko" may not be exactly what I mean.......

The Hiragana there is a little off. You didn't use the particle は and you put "on'a" (おんあ) instead of "on'na" (おんな).
That's right if you like cute girls. I'm not exactly sure what age range "girl" covers and when it should become 女の人 (おんなのひと), though.

Originally Posted by Nyokou

How would you say "rave" in katakana?

My guess would be レーヴ (reivu) or レーッヴ (reivvu). The extended "E" sounds more correct... I'll let someone who knows for sure answer.

Found something else wrong with the opening:

Originally Posted by Sunako_Nakahara_Girl

Cell Phone Number – haitai no bangou –　はいたいのばんごう

はいたい is "pregnancy". ケータイ (携帯) is "mobile phone". keitai no bangou.