[kryptonlegion]

Originally Posted by jono2007

Descriptive using a repetitive tone. Quite good, but to be blunt, I'm kind of sick of poems with all the 'I love this girl' sh*t. That's what this poem is about, right? A dude wakes up, deels good, remembers a dream about a girl, smiles, feels good, hopes the feeling stays. That about sums it up. Sorry if I'm being insensitive, but that's the way I feel. It's an opinion. I rest my case.

Everything does not need to be analyzed. And I am sorry that you are not more open-minded.