12-10-2007, 10:17 PM
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FFR Player
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: A shed :(
Posts: 41
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Re: I wrote something
I'm try to work on how its presented, then I'm going to get rid of words that tend to be used alot. Well, only if in rare condition, were there is not a word I can think of. Well, I'm just rambling, so I going to try another one later on. Finally at the end of this, I would like to thank you for pointers, and the constructive criticism. I hope to post another one soon, BUT BETTER!! :P
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Last edited by rustyspoons; 12-11-2007 at 10:31 PM..
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