[SulferDragon]

This is supposed to be a simfile pack, not a free critique thread. I could easily just reject the files without an explanation, but I at least tell you what's wrong. I'm not going into full detail saying, "*insert measures* are blah blah." I don't want to sound rude, but I have other things to do. If you can't figure it out then get better, and come back to the file later on.