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Dragula219 · 10-15-2007, 09:06 AM

The only one I really enjoyed and think is a good poem is Apocrypha. The rest of them just don't have flow to them. It's also the only one that seems to be straight from your mind, as the others seem as if you had a thesaurus next to you (no offense if you didn't, but it just seems that way.)

10-15-2007, 09:06 AM	#12
Dragula219 FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Much sexier than Hayden Panettiere Age: 34 Posts: 629	Re: Constructive Criticism Please :D The only one I really enjoyed and think is a good poem is Apocrypha. The rest of them just don't have flow to them. It's also the only one that seems to be straight from your mind, as the others seem as if you had a thesaurus next to you (no offense if you didn't, but it just seems that way.) __________________ Violent Skank is Violent!