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perfect_fat 04-18-2004 11:02 PM

Haiku
 
Post your Haiku Poems
This could get Interesting
Please no foul language

GuidoHunter 04-18-2004 11:08 PM

Writing a Haiku
Takes seventeen syllables
Of profound insight

(Not mine, but I felt it was appropriate)

http://www.mikee385.com/andy

Jam930 04-19-2004 04:19 AM

theres too much homework
i am drowning in this crap
procrastination

IronMonk 04-19-2004 07:07 AM

not my poetry, but they deserve posting

I can't write Haiku.
Something about syllables.
I don't understand.

speaking in haiku
is so bloody difficult
i gave up at lunch

The other people
Who are writing haiku here
Are very skillful.

I drink coffee,
I do not write Haiku,
I hate Haiku.


not a haiku but i think i should add it for it is cool.

Late one night in the middle of the day
Two dead men came out to play
Back to back they faced each other
Drew their swords and shot each other
If you dont believe this lie is true
Ask the blind man, He saw it too


mine

philosophy
is the sport of thought;
too deep for haiku.

Privateer 04-19-2004 02:10 PM

Haiku really sucks
Beatboxing is way cooler
It kicks haiku's ass

User6773 04-19-2004 03:34 PM

Do not debate me
Unless you know your stuff well.
Wow! How self-serving.

: P

Anonymous 04-19-2004 03:58 PM

I am quite impressed
But not too many posts yet
Let's hope we see more

User6773 04-19-2004 05:01 PM

FFR boards should
Require logins to post
So there are no guests

perfect_fat 04-19-2004 06:56 PM

FFR Should stop
Loggin me the hell out dawg
It's hurting my head

chillywilly 04-19-2004 06:58 PM

from the man show--

she is an angel
an angel who does porn films
Jenna Jameson

User6773 04-19-2004 07:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by perfect_fat
FFR Should stop
Loggin me the hell out dawg
It's hurting my head

I think you should check
To see if you are logged in
Before you make posts

chillywilly 04-19-2004 09:18 PM

OMFG j00
Just got pwnd by teh chardish
LMAO n00b

nickadeemus 04-19-2004 09:30 PM

Worker bees can leave
Even drones can fly away
The queen is their slave


Please know where that is from.

IronMonk 04-19-2004 11:03 PM

fight club was awsome
schizophrenia is nifty
i look like brad pit

Lupin_the_3rd 04-19-2004 11:12 PM

One day I couldn't
Get to the bathroom in time
Now I wear diapers


Mister Miyagi
Says: Veddy goo Julie san
I want his body

Here's an idea:
Limericks are way cooler, man
I want to write those

A man once told me
"Hey kid, I'm a computer!"
Now I don't download

A gumshoe asked me:
Where In the world is Carmen?
Who? Sandiago.

IronMonk 04-19-2004 11:28 PM

hahahah, nice gi joe psa referance, i would give you points for that but im sure you have more then you have need for

perfect_fat 04-20-2004 12:45 AM

Iron monk you tool
you broke the haiku thread yo
now you must pay G

Cenright 04-20-2004 12:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by IronMonk
Late one night in the middle of the day
Two dead men came out to play
Back to back they faced each other
Drew their swords and shot each other
If you dont believe this lie is true
Ask the blind man, He saw it too


This is how I remembered it...


One bright day in the middle of the night
Two dead boys got up to fight
Back to back they faced each other
Drew their swords and shot each other
The deaf policeman heard the noise
Came and shot those two dead boys
If you dont believe this lie is true
Ask the blind man, He saw it too



Ok, I'm a little tired, let's see how mine comes out:

Life is like a rose
Petals must work together
Then it is complete

jewpinthethird 04-20-2004 01:05 AM

Other Poems suck
Meaningless waste of paper
Haiku is the best

Twelve Forteen A M
So, I am going to stop
School Day tomorrow

Jam930 04-20-2004 02:10 AM

if it needs a long
sermon to proclaim it's art
probably bullshit

...had to cut a word
because it was one too long
to make a haiku


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