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Best/Deepest poem ever. Discuss
Once upon a time
I came up with a little rhyme So this is it I hope that it will be a hit There once was a little boat But it could not float It just sunk Because it was missing a big ol' chunk Water rushed in Through the hull made of tin Until it was full Forming a big pool All of the fishes Thought that the wreck was the solution To all of their wishes Because they were sick of swimming in polution They all loved the ship And they all felt so hip Because they were tired of swimming in sewage The fish turned the ship into a disco But it was a big risk though Because it used enough electricity To light a big sign that said Electric Kittie That was the name of their club Which was run by a mean fish named Bub Bub ran the club with an iron fist He wouldn't let anyone in who wasn't on his list Many fish waited all day But he just made them go away Some of the dissappointed fishies cried and cried Because they were rejected everytime they tried Then one day a smart fish named Wubba Wubba Decided to start his own club named Hubba Hubba Now Big Dubya as he liked to be called Was very very bald But he did not care Because no fish have any hair His new club was a hit And Big Bub said @&$! As he threw a big fit Bub made a plan To make his club the best in the sea He decided that he should start to sell tea But then he realized that he was not a man And he could not drink tea Even if it was in the sea The moral to the story is this Never drink anything that looks like ..... That is the end of my story And please don't worry I will never write anything like that Again until you buy me a big fluffy hat |
X_X Ouch. That was bad. Way too much rhyme-forcing.
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Weird poem...
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Nice rhymes.
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That hardly even classifies as a poem. Too much forced rhyming, there's a lack of concrete imagery, and the poem goes nowhere.
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You are such a confused little man. What you failed to see was the underlying symbolism found in the poem.
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That sounds like something from Where the Sidewalk Ends. (about as deep as a kiddie pool.)
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A lost path; alien time
Familiar route; cellar door OH MAN I R TEH BEST. |
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