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~Zero~ 07-4-2014 05:12 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by rCaliberGX (Post 4160449)
artist for I Burn should be "Jeff Williams feat. Casey Lee Williams"

Blame Wafles if its incorrect, I just go based off what the website states. If we want to be really accurate I guess it should be "Jeff Williams Feat. Casey Lee Williams & Lamar Hall"

rCaliberGX 07-4-2014 05:21 PM

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yup, i think wafles just used the info i put in for my RWBY files in yolomania 2 (which was incorrect)

~Zero~ 07-4-2014 05:29 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
fixed with artist (didnt add Lamar Hall, because i am such a bad guy lol)



Oni-Paranoia 07-4-2014 07:00 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
Shedding off some PS rust. Not particularly happy with artist placement or the use of crosshatching or the background. Placeholder basically.

Edit: Would be grand if I got the title correct (-1 for being side-tracked).



~Zero~ 07-4-2014 07:17 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
redid these because I hated my other set, Baby I is next






Wafles 07-5-2014 01:02 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
Site & OP updated

You guys are awesome <3<3<3

Gonna try and get a few sets today but I'm trying to finish a really long file today so it depends on how long that takes

Zephei 07-5-2014 07:07 PM

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Wafles 07-5-2014 08:12 PM

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dayum zephei

looks sick

Gundam-Dude 07-5-2014 08:35 PM

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The letterforms are so similar that I see only "DDD" or "JJJ" with even "OOO" if I squint and/or blur my vision. And I won't bother ranting on about consistency in letterforms when you warped everything intentionally but to keep it short and sweet, it doesn't look aesthetically pleasing (frankly it just looks like bad graffiti done by a middle school kid, no offense) and the legibility and readability is really fucked up. I do understand if your objective was to make something mildly chaotic to match the song, but there are other alternatives and better ways to do this.

Also consider changing the typeface for "terminal 11" because I can't even begin to make sense of why the numerals are the exact same letterforms as the lowercase "i". It's just overall a poorly designed typeface, rofl.

Just my opinions, take it with a pinch of salt. If it's completely okay with Wafles and co. then there's no need to give a shit about what the font police has to say.

Zephei 07-5-2014 09:44 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude (Post 4160861)
The letterforms are so similar that I see only "DDD" or "JJJ" with even "OOO" if I squint and/or blur my vision. And I won't bother ranting on about consistency in letterforms when you warped everything intentionally but to keep it short and sweet, it doesn't look aesthetically pleasing (frankly it just looks like bad graffiti done by a middle school kid, no offense) and the legibility and readability is really fucked up. I do understand if your objective was to make something mildly chaotic to match the song, but there are other alternatives and better ways to do this.

Also consider changing the typeface for "terminal 11" because I can't even begin to make sense of why the numerals are the exact same letterforms as the lowercase "i". It's just overall a poorly designed typeface, rofl.

Just my opinions, take it with a pinch of salt. If it's completely okay with Wafles and co. then there's no need to give a shit about what the font police has to say.

Yeah, I didn't really consider legibility when I chose the typeface. I'll redo it if other people have trouble making out the text.

~Zero~ 07-5-2014 09:50 PM

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I think this is alright, the banner might be a bit of an eyesore.




made a re-color (which is less of an eyesore imo)




part 3, one very minor thing bothered me a lot







Wafles 07-5-2014 10:33 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
Diggin' the second set. I was kinda clueless on what to do for that song so I'm glad you grabbed it haha.

Wafles 07-5-2014 10:34 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Zephei (Post 4160895)
Yeah, I didn't really consider legibility when I chose the typeface. I'll redo it if other people have trouble making out the text.

I think the only hard letter to make out is the O

I still think it looks sweet as is but GD's points are valid


edit- its a moot point anyway because choof just pulled odd22 from the pack and didn't care for the set

Oni-Paranoia 07-5-2014 11:37 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
Some more. Further shaking off the rust and a lot of discussions with ~Zero~.



Wafles 07-5-2014 11:55 PM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Oni-Paranoia (Post 4160934)
Some more. Further shaking off the rust and a lot of discussions with ~Zero~.



This doesn't really match the song at all IMO
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=laCqxpQRGt4

Song is really cutesy/speedy/fun, your set is kinda dark/cold IMO


Edit: HOWEVER, the background/text could work really well for Moonearth [DJ Sharpnel]
DJ Sharpnel Logo: http://i1130.photobucket.com/albums/...djsharpnel.png

Oni-Paranoia 07-6-2014 12:02 AM

Re: Yolomania 3 Graphics Help Please!
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Wafles (Post 4160940)
Song is really cutesy/speedy/fun, your set is kinda dark/cold IMO

True. I don't always use the song as a reference though (which in this case is a bad thing.)

Anyhow, if you feel it's better for Moonearth, I'll just change the text and/or color. :)

Wafles 07-6-2014 12:03 AM

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Go for moonearth with it IMO
color's probably fine but use the song as a reference I guess, up to you

Wafles 07-6-2014 02:06 AM

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Made a set

source image looked dumb in 800x600 so this one got a 720 set



Oni-Paranoia 07-6-2014 11:33 AM

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Switched. Text on the BG feels high, but I believe it looked worse low; picking poisons.



~Zero~ 07-6-2014 12:39 PM

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