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zhul4nder 12-25-2007 11:11 PM

Tension
 
It's biting at me
Eating away sanity

I'm breaking down
Deteriorating my vanity

Like in a thick mist
I breathe in an ocean
sealing my soul
living under an oppression

I await my fate
slowly but surely
for the answer of my true mate...

Lovely.

Merry Christmas ( and happy holidays for those who want to be politically correct)
question: should i stick to free verse? I haven't done many rhyming poems XD


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