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rparty89 03-29-2017 11:40 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
bump? sent something a day before deadline. whatevs.

James May 03-29-2017 11:42 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
Gonna check it out when I am off work tomorrow (or today technically, and I extended the deadline xwx)

rparty89 04-1-2017 06:26 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
rip?

James May 04-1-2017 08:41 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
not rip. Gonna judge the files in a bit

JOTATELLO 04-2-2017 12:59 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
The pack will be released after March 31 or after April 30? Lol

James May 04-2-2017 10:29 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by JOTATELLO (Post 4540632)
The pack will be released after March 31 or after April 30? Lol

edit: fixed! Also, I replaced one of my own files since I felt that it was better then what I had initially was going to put in there

Anyhow, notes!

Dracula (Storn) - Accept with fixes
-offset should be 0.640
-holds in the intro felt too long for the warranted sounds. (up until 42.06)
-somehow snaps onsync at 1:00.032, I would check that out since adjusting the offset makes this part off
-would be nice for freezes to go with extending the guitar sounds like the ones in 1:31.157 to accentuate the riff.
-should be a jumptrill for the drum fills like in 1:32.375
-jumps should be applied to the 4ths like in 3:10.460
-jumps should be applied on the 16ths and 8th to be jumptrills on 3:11.304
-sync drifts from 3:37.428 to 3:48.280 where it snaps back on sync
-not a bad file, but should look through some of these instances. Definitely a good change of pace from the usual metal files that are on NBJS haha.

Cryonix (rparty & Bobby) - Fixes needed
*Judging Beginner Chart only, I am not well-versed with index files so I do apologize for that.
-From 31.863 to 32.352, its best fitted as a jumptrill to accentuate the drum sounds.
-Man, I was hoping for a piano roll here (37.080)
-same thing here on 37.733, jump trill
-I think the section from 43.113 to 47.678 are actually 12th stream with the 16 drum fills between? need to double check but the layering (spare from the drum fills) felt way too much and the ghost notes, is it halloween?
-ghost notes on 1:03.086 & 1:03.167
-sync deviates by a 96th from 1:09.689 to 1:13.765
-This isn't a jumptrill on 1:14.254, it's actually a 48th mini split burst [12-43], which you can get away with that because chord cohesion
-1:19.472 is an unneeded quad tbh
-ghost notes from 1:19.716 to 1:20.287
-get rid of that mine on 1:50.946, this will ruin anyone's run if they want to AAA it lmao
-not a bad file, but lots of minor technical issues just ruins the flow tbh.

From the Depths of Time (CARMELLO) - rejected
-sync is off by a 96th, plus the sync drifts
+13.502 made me laugh because it is fitting
-lots of missing layering opportunites for the drums throughout the song after 15.184
-the section from 24.784 to 33.334...wtf those anchors??? aaaaaaaaaaaa that needs lots of reworking the flow is broken here
+the slowdown is actually fitting considering the intensity of the song here.
-1:17.283 ...ygisdufsg
-1:20.433 you made it into a jump but the following notes are 64th mini-bursts? Consistency please.
-ghost notes, should be shifted up on 1:25.158 & 1:25.308
-1:31.983 ...yare yare daze....at least it wasn't as bad as the first anchored section but there was no flow to be felt there.
-I think you were a bit late on the burst on 1:41.583, that should be shifted up an entire 16th with the 4th being a jump
-the anchoring needs to go on 1:46.383
-This file needs major fixing. There's the fundamentals of basic stepping done on this file but this would need a major revamping before I can consider the file accepted.

Wumbology (Xelnya) - I love you, but I hate you lmfao
...goddammit Xel, I love you but I hate you lmfao
-Although ya missed a mine on 27.590, shift it up from where the 8th jump is
-and check the hand usage in the latter half, the ones that used as an anchor for the "long" jacks, I don't think the sound is warranted there.

Hot Buttered (CARMELLO) - rejected
-sync is a bit off so just adjust it a bit
-This is the better file of the two but there are major jump inconsistencies throughout the file. I would like that you take a look throughout the file to fix the jump placements. I would actually like to see this fixed up more than your other submission to be honest.

rparty89 04-2-2017 10:54 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by James May (Post 4540721)
Cryonix (rparty & Bobby) - Fixes needed
*Judging Beginner Chart only, I am not well-versed with index files so I do apologize for that.
-From 31.863 to 32.352, its best fitted as a jumptrill to accentuate the drum sounds.
-Man, I was hoping for a piano roll here (37.080)
-same thing here on 37.733, jump trill
-I think the section from 43.113 to 47.678 are actually 12th stream with the 16 drum fills between? need to double check but the layering (spare from the drum fills) felt way too much and the ghost notes, is it halloween?
-ghost notes on 1:03.086 & 1:03.167
-sync deviates by a 96th from 1:09.689 to 1:13.765
-This isn't a jumptrill on 1:14.254, it's actually a 48th mini split burst [12-43], which you can get away with that because chord cohesion
-1:19.472 is an unneeded quad tbh
-ghost notes from 1:19.716 to 1:20.287
-get rid of that mine on 1:50.946, this will ruin anyone's run if they want to AAA it lmao
-not a bad file, but lots of minor technical issues just ruins the flow tbh.

spooky halloween.
fixed everything, including your rollololol.
your "12ths" are actually 8ths
your 96ths are 192nds (most of them)
sent however.

James May 04-2-2017 11:07 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: April 30th]
 
Will look at it after work tomorrow

XelNya 04-2-2017 11:15 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by James May (Post 4540721)
Wumbology (Xelnya) - I love you, but I hate you lmfao
...goddammit Xel, I love you but I hate you lmfao
-Although ya missed a mine on 27.590, shift it up from where the 8th jump is
-and check the hand usage in the latter half, the ones that used as an anchor for the "long" jacks, I don't think the sound is warrented there.

I WUMBO. YOU WUMBO. WUMBO. WUMBOLOGY, THE STUDY OF WUMBO.

You gotta admit it's a good meme

Shadow_God_10 04-2-2017 11:20 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: April 30th]
 
Oh goodie! I'll throw in a file or two your way once I finish them up. Only time I can actually work on stuff is at night lmao

James May 04-2-2017 11:37 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by rparty89 (Post 4540728)
spooky halloween.
fixed everything, including your rollololol.
your "12ths" are actually 8ths
your 96ths are 192nds (most of them)
sent however.

Also, scorpion fire when

rparty89 04-3-2017 01:27 AM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: April 30th]
 
Scorpion fire now.

Arntonach 04-3-2017 03:48 AM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: April 30th]
 
I have a super old file that I was working on that ended up in a solo compilation. If I fixed it up all snazzy like, will you take it?

James May 04-3-2017 04:47 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: April 30th]
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Arntonach (Post 4540757)
I have a super old file that I was working on that ended up in a solo compilation. If I fixed it up all snazzy like, will you take it?

For this occasion, I'll let you send it, as it's technically a v2

James May 04-3-2017 05:10 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: April 30th]
 
wew

Scorpion Fire (rparty) - Accept
(I am assuming the challenge chart is yours)
-Love it. Minor notes placements in the intro and ending but otherwise, accept
-intro notes: shift the following notes down: 11.812, 12.177, 12.398, 12.521, and 12.643
-remove the two notes on 12.704 and 12.744
-shift the notes down to 2:01.456, 2:02.414, 2:03.872, 2:04.393 and 2:04.956 in the ending

Cryonix (fixed version) - Accept
-Much better, there was one misplaced hold but if you don't mind, I can easily fix that.

storn42 04-3-2017 10:32 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 

Quote:

Originally Posted by James May (Post 4540721)
Dracula (Storn) - Accept with fixes
-offset should be 0.640

fixed

Quote:

-holds in the intro felt too long for the warranted sounds. (up until 42.06)
i'd argue that the notes are warranted as the first note of each section is being "held". i can still hear the note through the shorter sections but as it does seem to fade during the longer sections i shortened those.

Quote:

-somehow snaps onsync at 1:00.032, I would check that out since adjusting the offset makes this part off
fixed

Quote:

-would be nice for freezes to go with extending the guitar sounds like the ones in 1:31.157 to accentuate the riff.
wow.... i've been going back and fourth trying to figure out what this means all day lol. i think i got what you mean and i really like the idea!

Quote:

-should be a jumptrill for the drum fills like in 1:32.375
i feel like turning those into jump trills takes a way from the file. the drum is already shown off be having the pattern change to trills and there is an accent at the end that wouldn't get shown off.

Quote:

-jumps should be applied to the 4ths like in 3:10.460
Not sure what you mean here

Quote:

-jumps should be applied on the 16ths and 8th to be jumptrills on 3:11.304
done.

Quote:

-sync drifts from 3:37.428 to 3:48.280 where it snaps back on sync
more or less just the band failing to hold a steady tempo. fixed.

Quote:

-not a bad file, but should look through some of these instances. Definitely a good change of pace from the usual metal files that are on NBJS haha.
:D


sent fixes.

James May 04-3-2017 10:45 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: March 31]
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by storn42 (Post 4540911)
sent fixes.

Got it and ya locked clear fam

rparty89 04-3-2017 10:57 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: April 30th]
 
You can fix the freeze wherever it is. Plus cool shit. I'll maybe fix scorpion.

James May 04-3-2017 11:02 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: April 30th]
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by rparty89 (Post 4540915)
You can fix the freeze wherever it is. Plus cool shit. I'll maybe fix scorpion.

Cool. Like I said, its nothing too major and can be easily fixed from my end.

Shadow_God_10 04-3-2017 11:31 PM

Re: Project 0 (Name change pending) [Submissions Open; Deadline: April 30th]
 
I'll most likely be sending 3 files maybe 4 for sure

1. Pre-Parade (Toradora! OP)
2. Unravel (Tokyo Ghoul OP) <--- This is the maybe. I'm having issues with it, anyone wanna help?
3. Magia (Puella Magi Madoka Magica ED)
4. Noh Stage (TMNT Tournament Fighters)

Noh Stage will most likely be sent your way first (Expect jacks and minijacks)


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